Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember people's names and phone numbers. Additionally, I keep track of important deadlines for my college projects by making notes.

Sugestão: Your answer is too long and confusing. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed a project deadline because I was busy with multiple tasks and family responsibilities. This taught me to manage my time better.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as completing assignments and getting enough sleep. For example, I set reminders for project deadlines to ensure I submit them on time, which helps me maintain good health and productivity.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is not clearly expressed. Use a clear topic sentence and link your supporting details logically. Avoid awkward phrasing and redundancy.

Exemplo: I remember important things by setting alarms and reminders on my phone. This helps me manage my time effectively and ensures I do not miss any important tasks or deadlines.

× I could recognise myself and names and phone numbers keeping track.

✓ I could recognise myself and keep track of names and phone numbers.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'keeping' without proper structure. The verb 'keep' should be used in the base form after 'could' to express ability. 'Keeping track' needs to be rephrased to 'keep track of' to be grammatically correct.

× According to that site, I can remember the project of deadlines, that which has me, which has to be submitted by college guides.

✓ According to that site, I can remember project deadlines that I have to submit to college guides.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'That which has me' is unclear and incorrect. It should be replaced with 'that I have to submit' to clarify the subject and object relationship.

× Yes, sometimes I have been forgetting my deadline of project which has to be submitted to our faculty or sometimes I even though I was handling multiple tasks and with families it was busy work schedules I unable to submit my project deadline.

✓ Yes, sometimes I forget my project deadlines which have to be submitted to our faculty. Sometimes, even though I am handling multiple tasks and busy work schedules with my family, I am unable to submit my project on time.

The original sentence mixes tenses incorrectly and has awkward phrasing. 'Have been forgetting' should be 'forget' for habitual action. 'I unable' is missing the verb 'am'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I need to remember daily life.

✓ I need to remember things in daily life.

The phrase 'remember daily life' is unclear and incorrect. It should specify what needs to be remembered, such as 'things in daily life'.

× The sleeping is crucial for O overall well-being for health and or keeping assignments and tasks or reminder reminders themselves as project that should be submitted before the deadline.

✓ Sleeping is crucial for overall well-being and health, as well as for keeping track of assignments and tasks or reminders for projects that should be submitted before the deadline.

The original sentence has redundant words ('O overall'), incorrect article usage ('The sleeping'), and unclear phrasing. 'Sleeping' should be used without 'The'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× It is very helpful to keep the reminders of the task.

✓ It is very helpful to keep reminders of tasks.

The phrase 'the reminders of the task' is awkward and unnecessarily specific. Using 'reminders of tasks' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× This is the daily routine. I use it to rememberize and collect and.

✓ This is my daily routine. I use it to remember and collect information.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a non-standard word 'rememberize'. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper verbs.

× I use it to set alarms and reminders on my phone which is a daily task and to keep date and fix it.

✓ I use it to set alarms and reminders on my phone as a daily task and to keep dates fixed.

The phrase 'to keep date and fix it' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It is corrected to 'keep dates fixed' to convey the intended meaning.

× Time flexible is very flexible.

✓ My schedule is very flexible.

The phrase 'Time flexible is very flexible' is awkward and incorrect. It is replaced with a clearer and grammatically correct sentence.

× This makes my time management is so effective and efficiency.

✓ This makes my time management very effective and efficient.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice. 'Is so effective and efficiency' is incorrect; it should be 'very effective and efficient'.

× So I would recognize by remembering the setting alarms.

✓ So I recognize things by setting alarms.

The phrase 'remembering the setting alarms' is awkward and incorrect. It is corrected to 'recognize things by setting alarms' for clarity and grammatical correctness.