Memory— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
No, I'm not good at memorizing things. You know, I often forget where my phone or my keys I have put. And also there are some things that my mom told me and, you know, for about 10 minutes I forgot it and that was really funny.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I still remember that day I forgot my bestie's birthday and she was so sad about it and after that I apologize to her and I often. I also bought her favorite perfumes as her her birthday present.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I need to remember a lot of things, for example the school tasks and the deadline and also some anniversaries or important events.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I often use some apps, for example calendars, you know I can wrote down some important things under the dates and that was really clear for me to see it. And also I have forgot many things so I often use the alarm clocks too often remind me some important states or tasks.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复和多余的词汇。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和语法的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。
Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my phone or keys. Sometimes, I even forget what my mom told me just a few minutes ago, which I find quite funny.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并且避免重复词汇。
Exemplo: Yes, I remember once I forgot my best friend's birthday, and she was very sad. After that, I apologized and bought her favorite perfume as a birthday present.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连接词使句子显得有些生硬。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时可以增加具体细节丰富内容。
Exemplo: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as school tasks and their deadlines, as well as anniversaries and other important events.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构复杂且重复。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法，使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: I often use apps like calendars to write down important dates, which helps me see them clearly. Also, I set alarm clocks to remind me of important tasks or events.
Gramática
× I often forget where my phone or my keys I have put.
✓ I often forget where I have put my phone or my keys.
句子结构混乱，导致意思不清晰。应将宾语和动词顺序调整，使句子符合英语表达习惯。
× for about 10 minutes I forgot it and that was really funny.
✓ for about 10 minutes I forgot them and that was really funny.
前文提到的是复数的“things”，代词应使用复数形式“them”，而不是单数“it”。
× after that I apologize to her and I often.
✓ after that I apologized to her.
描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式“apologized”。句子末尾“and I often”不完整，应删除。
× I also bought her favorite perfumes as her her birthday present.
✓ I also bought her favorite perfume as her birthday present.
“perfumes”复数不合适，通常送礼物用单数“perfume”。重复使用“her”是错误，应删除一个。
× I can wrote down some important things under the dates and that was really clear for me to see it.
✓ I can write down some important things on the dates and that is really clear for me to see.
“wrote”应为原形“write”因为前面有情态动词“can”。“under the dates”应改为“on the dates”，表示在日期上。时态应保持一致，改为现在时“is”。
× I have forgot many things so I often use the alarm clocks too often remind me some important states or tasks.
✓ I have forgotten many things so I often use alarm clocks to remind me of some important dates or tasks.
“have forgot”应为“have forgotten”，过去分词形式。去掉重复的“too often”，改为“to remind”。“states”应为“dates”，符合语境。
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