Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan mengandung pengulangan serta ketidakjelasan. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih langsung dan jelas dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan menghindari pengulangan kata. Gunakan kalimat yang efektif dan tambahkan detail yang relevan dengan menggunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things, which makes school challenging for me. However, I try to improve by doing exercises like push-ups while reading, as it helps me focus better.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Sebaiknya gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hindari penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat seperti 'making knots'. Berikan alasan atau contoh spesifik untuk mendukung jawaban Anda dengan menggunakan kata penghubung agar lebih terstruktur.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things like people's names, which makes me feel bad. To improve, I plan to take notes and use reminders to help me remember better in the future.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda cukup jelas namun ada pengulangan kata dan tata bahasa yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih lancar dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide. Berikan detail spesifik tentang materi yang Anda pelajari atau pekerjaan Anda.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important materials related to my work and studies. Although I sometimes forget things, I enjoy learning and always try to overcome this challenge.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Sebaiknya gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan. Jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik bagaimana mencatat membantu Anda mengingat hal penting.

Exemplo: I remember important things by taking notes, which allows me to review the information later. This method makes it easier for me to recall details that I might otherwise forget.

× I'm pretty bad at memorizing things actually.

✓ I'm pretty bad at memorising things actually.

The verb 'memorising' should be in the '-ing' form after the preposition 'at'. The original sentence is correct in this regard, but the spelling 'memorizing' is American English while the rest uses British English spelling 'memorising'. Consistency in spelling is recommended.

× Uh, when I'm, it's, I have a difficult time in school because of that, but when I need to memorize memorizing, I need to do some, to do some exercise like push up while reading the thing.

✓ Uh, when I do, I have a difficult time in school because of that, but when I need to memorize, I need to do some exercises like push-ups while reading the material.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'When I'm, it's' is incomplete and confusing. 'Memorize memorizing' is redundant. 'Push up' should be plural 'push-ups' as it refers to exercises. 'The thing' is vague; 'the material' is clearer. Correct sentence structure improves clarity and meaning.

× Yes I do it very often, like I often forget people names.

✓ Yes, I do it very often; I often forget people's names.

The phrase 'people names' lacks the possessive form. It should be 'people's names' to indicate names belonging to people. Also, punctuation improves readability.

× So I need to do better in future.

✓ So I need to do better in the future.

The phrase 'in future' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct expression is 'in the future' when referring to time ahead.

× I mean maybe doing some notes, making knots and to improve my.

✓ I mean maybe taking some notes, making notes, and improving myself.

'Doing some notes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'taking some notes'. 'Making knots' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'making notes'. The phrase 'to improve my' is incomplete; it should be 'improving myself' or 'improving my skills'.

× I love to learn even though I always forgetting something but I I try to to face the challenge.

✓ I love to learn even though I always forget something, but I try to face the challenge.

'Always forgetting' should be 'always forget' to match the simple present tense used for habitual actions. The phrase 'I I try to to' contains repeated words and should be corrected to 'I try to'.

× I need to remember my material for my works or my studies.

✓ I need to remember my material for my work or my studies.

'Works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is an uncountable noun referring to one's job or tasks. 'Material' is correct as is.

× I take some notes so I can keep come back to the things and it's pretty hard to do it externally.

✓ I take some notes so I can keep coming back to the things, and it's pretty hard to do it externally.

'Keep come back' is incorrect; the correct form is 'keep coming back' using the present participle after 'keep'.

× So if I taking notes it's more easier.

✓ So if I take notes, it's easier.

'If I taking' is incorrect; it should be 'if I take' using the base form after 'if'. 'More easier' is redundant; 'easier' alone is correct.