Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I chose physics over history in high school because history required a lot of memorization, which I found difficult.

Sugestão: 回答内容较完整，但表达略显重复且有语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things like work project deadlines. Since then, I started using a to-do list and calendar reminders to make sure I don't miss anything important.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议分句并使用连接词，使表达更清晰流畅。

Exemplo: I need to remember many things daily, such as the due dates of my academic assignments because I have to plan ahead and submit them on time. Also, I remember my friends' birthdays so I can prepare gifts or celebrations.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，简洁明了地说明方法。

Exemplo: I usually use a to-do list app on my phone. I write down important tasks so I can easily check them later, and the app reminds me not to forget anything. It works well for me.

× No, I think memorizing things is difficult for me so that I choose physics rather than history in my Senior High School time because history needs me to memorize a lot of things.

✓ No, I think memorizing things is difficult for me, so I chose physics rather than history in my Senior High School time because history needs me to memorize a lot of things.

这里的动作发生在过去，应该使用过去时态。'choose' 应改为过去式 'chose'。此外，'so that' 用法不当，改为逗号加 'so' 更自然。

× Yes, I've forgotten something important like the deadlines of my work project or other things. After that I began to use some To Do List or make some reminder in my calendar so that I could not miss something important anyway.

✓ Yes, I've forgotten something important like the deadlines of my work project or other things. After that, I began to use some To Do Lists or make some reminders in my calendar so that I would not miss something important anyway.

'To Do List' 和 'reminder' 应使用复数形式，因为通常是多个事项。'could not' 在这里表达未来可能性，改为 'would not' 更合适。

× After that I began to use some To Do List or make some reminder in my calendar so that I could not miss something important anyway.

✓ After that I began to use some To Do Lists or make some reminders in my calendar so that I could not miss something important anyway.

'To Do List' 和 'reminder' 应使用复数形式，因为通常是多个事项。

× There are many things I need to remember in my daily life, for example the due dates of my academic assignments because I need to plan ahead and submit them on time and also I need to remember my friends birthdays so that I can prepare well.

✓ There are many things I need to remember in my daily life, for example the due dates of my academic assignments because I need to plan ahead and submit them on time, and also I need to remember my friends' birthdays so that I can prepare well.

'friends birthdays' 应为所有格，正确形式是 'friends' birthdays'，表示朋友们的生日。

× I always use to do lips apps in my phone. I write something important down in my so that I can read them easily when I put up my and also it can remind me don't forget important things.

✓ I always use to-do list apps on my phone. I write something important down in them so that I can read them easily when I open my phone, and also they can remind me not to forget important things.

'use to do lips apps' 是错误表达，应为 'use to-do list apps'。'in my' 后缺少名词，补充为 'in them'。'put up my' 不合适，改为 'open my phone'。'remind me don't forget' 应为 'remind me not to forget'。

× I write something important down in my so that I can read them easily when I put up my and also it can remind me don't forget important things.

✓ I write something important down in my phone so that I can read it easily when I open my phone, and also it can remind me not to forget important things.

'in my' 后缺少名词，应补充为 'in my phone'。'them' 指代不明确，改为 'it' 指代 'something important'。'put up my' 不合适，改为 'open my phone'。

× I write something important down in my so that I can read them easily when I put up my and also it can remind me don't forget important things.

✓ I write something important down in my phone so that I can read it easily when I open my phone, and also it can remind me not to forget important things.

句中 'and also' 连接两个动作，使用逗号分隔更合适。'don't forget' 应改为 'not to forget'，符合动词不定式用法。