Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
I'm not good at memorizing things because I usually lose my mind and forget some important details. For example, when I study it is difficult for me and it spend more time for me to remember things than others. But now I try to use a lot of methods to improve my memory.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, once I went out, I forgot to bring my phone. It costs a lot of inconvenience because I can't. I couldn't contact with anyone and check important messages. After that, I always double check my belongings when I went out to avoid this country.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life. For instance, I need to remember to bring essential items like phones or wallet. I need when I go out and I need to recall the knowledge when I study. Also, I need to keep my parents and my friends birthdays in mind so that I can give them birthday gifts.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I tend to keep crucial things in my mind, but since I have forgotten them a few times, I prefer to write them down or make notes on my phone. For example, I use reminder apps to set alarms so that I could remember them.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,例如“lose my mind”用法不当,且句子结构较为简单。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并注意时态和主谓一致。
Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget important details. For example, when I study, it takes me longer than others to remember information. However, I am trying different methods to improve my memory.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“costs a lot of inconvenience”表达不自然,“avoid this country”用词错误。建议使用更准确和连贯的表达,并注意句子完整性。
Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, once I went out without my phone, which caused a lot of inconvenience because I couldn't contact anyone or check important messages. Since then, I always double-check my belongings before leaving.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,如“phones or wallet”应为“phone or wallet”,句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构,使用更准确的词汇和连贯的表达。
Exemplo: I need to remember many things in my daily life. For example, I always make sure to bring essential items like my phone and wallet when I go out. I also try to recall what I have learned when studying. Additionally, I remember my parents' and friends' birthdays so I can give them gifts.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然,但时态使用不够准确,如“could”应为“can”。建议注意时态一致性,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: I usually try to keep important things in my mind, but since I have forgotten some before, I prefer to write them down or make notes on my phone. For example, I use reminder apps to set alarms so that I can remember important tasks.
× For example, when I study it is difficult for me and it spend more time for me to remember things than others.
✓ For example, when I study it is difficult for me and it spends more time for me to remember things than others.
这里主语是it,第三人称单数,谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式spends,而不是spend。
× It costs a lot of inconvenience because I can't.
✓ It caused a lot of inconvenience because I couldn't.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情,动词时态应使用过去时,不能用现在时的can't。
× I couldn't contact with anyone and check important messages.
✓ I couldn't contact anyone and check important messages.
动词contact后不需要介词with,直接加宾语即可。
× After that, I always double check my belongings when I went out to avoid this country.
✓ After that, I always double check my belongings when I go out to avoid this situation.
这里描述的是习惯动作,应该用一般现在时go out,而不是过去时went out。另外,原句中的"avoid this country"不合适,应该是"avoid this situation"或类似表达。
× I need when I go out and I need to recall the knowledge when I study.
✓ I need to remember when I go out and I need to recall the knowledge when I study.
原句缺少动词不定式to remember,导致句子结构不完整。
× After that, I always double check my belongings when I went out to avoid this country.
✓ After that, I always double check my belongings when I go out to avoid this situation.
这里描述的是习惯动作,应该用一般现在时go out,而不是过去时went out。另外,原句中的"avoid this country"不合适,应该是"avoid this situation"或类似表达。