Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'bad at memory things', 'forgot any things'). Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp và tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget easily. However, if something is very important, I make an effort to remember it.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, thiếu liên kết câu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ nối để làm câu mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, sometimes I forget important things, but if something is really important, I usually remind myself by repeating it many times. For example, I always remember birthdays and exam dates.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng, câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy nói rõ bạn cần nhớ điều gì trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

Exemplo: As a 12th grade student, I need to remember my study schedule and important lessons every day to prepare well for exams.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết.

Exemplo: I remember important things in several ways. For instance, I repeat them multiple times, write notes in apps on my phone, and set alarms to remind me.

× I can easily forgot, forget, forget any things.

✓ I can easily forget anything.

The word 'any things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and 'any' should be followed by a singular or uncountable noun in this context. Also, 'forgot' is past tense and should be 'forget' in present tense here. The correct phrase is 'forget anything'.

× But some something is very important, I will I remember it.

✓ But if something is very important, I will remember it.

The sentence lacks the conditional 'if' to correctly express the condition. Also, 'some something' is incorrect; it should be 'if something'. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used for future intention.

× I know if something is very important I will notice or repeat many times, for example like birthday days or the day for exams.

✓ I know if something is very important, I will notice it or repeat it many times, for example birthdays or exam days.

The modal verb 'will' is correctly used. However, 'birthday days' is redundant; 'birthdays' is sufficient. Also, 'the day for exams' is better expressed as 'exam days'. Added 'it' after 'notice' and 'repeat' for clarity.

× As I am a 12th grade student so learning is a most important to do in my daily life.

✓ As I am a 12th grade student, learning is the most important thing to do in my daily life.

The phrase 'a most important' is incorrect; it should be 'the most important'. Also, 'learning' as a noun should be followed by 'thing' to complete the idea. Added comma after introductory clause.

× So I I need to remember learn how to learn how.

✓ So I need to remember how to learn.

The sentence is repetitive and lacks proper structure. 'Remember learn how to learn how' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'remember how to learn'.

× I re I remember important things by many ways, like I repeat it more times and I note it in my apps in my phone to remember and I can set set alarm.

✓ I remember important things in many ways, like repeating them several times, noting them in apps on my phone, and setting alarms.

The sentence has repetition ('I re I', 'set set'), incorrect prepositions ('in my apps in my phone' should be 'in apps on my phone'), and awkward phrasing. Using gerunds ('repeating') improves fluency. Also, 'more times' is better as 'several times'.