Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'every single day, every single morning', you can say 'every morning'.

Exemplo: I was good at memorising things in primary school because, as a Muslim, I had to memorise the Quran, which is written in Arabic. Since it has many verses, I practised memorising it every morning with my dad.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct tenses and sentence structures. Avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and be more specific. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: As I have grown older, I often forget important things. For instance, once my mom asked me to buy some ingredients for dinner, but I forgot to buy the sausage she reminded me about several times, which made her quite upset.

Sugestão: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details. Avoid repetition and improve grammar, such as 'a good result' instead of 'a good results'.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember the content from my A Level course books to achieve good results and enter a reputable university. Additionally, I try to recall any instructions or advice my parents give me.

Sugestão: Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures for clarity. Combine short sentences using linking words to improve coherence. For example, instead of 'Since my phone is always in my hand. It's just easier...', say 'Since my phone is always with me, it is easier...'.

Exemplo: I usually write important things on a piece of paper or send myself reminders through WeChat so I can check them frequently. Since my phone is always with me, this method helps me complete tasks given by my friends, teachers, or parents more efficiently.

× I used to be good in memorizing things when I was in primary because as you can see, I'm a Muslim.

✓ I used to be good at memorizing things when I was in primary because as you can see, I'm a Muslim.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at' not 'in'. We say 'good at' when referring to skills or abilities. So, 'good at memorizing' is correct.

× We do have to memorize Qurans and Quran is basically written in another language which Arabic and it has so many verses so that I have to memorize every single day, every single morning together with my dad.

✓ We do have to memorize Qurans and the Quran is basically written in another language, which is Arabic, and it has so many verses so that I have to memorize it every single day, every single morning together with my dad.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'Quran' because it refers to a specific book. Also, 'which Arabic' needs the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Additionally, 'memorize every single day' should specify what is memorized, so 'memorize it' is clearer.

× As I grow older, I always forgot important things.

✓ As I grew older, I always forgot important things.

The phrase 'As I grow older' is present tense, but the rest of the sentence is past tense. To maintain consistency, 'grow' should be in past tense 'grew' to match 'forgot'.

× last time my mom sent me to this one grocery store to get her some ingredient for dinner,

✓ last time my mom sent me to this one grocery store to get her some ingredients for dinner,

'Ingredient' is countable and usually used in plural when referring to multiple items. Since 'some' implies more than one, 'ingredients' should be plural.

× which make her, you know, kind of my mad.

✓ which made her, you know, kind of mad at me.

The verb should be in past tense 'made' to agree with the past event. Also, 'my mad' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'mad at me' to express the feeling directed towards the speaker.

× I basically have to remember everything that is written on my course book for my A Level program just to make sure that I can get a good results for my A levels, to make sure that I can enter a good university successfully and I will.

✓ I basically have to remember everything that is written in my course book for my A Level program just to make sure that I can get good results for my A levels, to make sure that I can enter a good university successfully and I will.

'Course book' is usually referred to as 'in' rather than 'on'. 'Results' is plural, so 'a good results' is incorrect; it should be 'good results' without 'a'.

× I also have to remember something that my my parents told me a day before.

✓ I also have to remember something that my parents told me the day before.

The phrase 'a day before' is vague; 'the day before' is more appropriate to refer to a specific previous day. Also, 'my my' is a repetition error.

× I normally wrote it down in a piece of paper or just put it randomly texted myself through WeChat so I can check it more frequently.

✓ I normally write it down on a piece of paper or just randomly text myself through WeChat so I can check it more frequently.

The verb 'wrote' is past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense 'write' is correct. Also, 'in a piece of paper' should be 'on a piece of paper' because we write on surfaces. 'Put it randomly texted myself' is incorrect; it should be 'just randomly text myself'.

× Since my phone is always in my hand.

✓ Since my phone is always in my hand,

This sentence is a fragment without a main clause. Adding a comma indicates it is connected to the next sentence. Also, 'in my hand' is acceptable but 'in my hands' is more common; however, the original is acceptable.

× It's just easier and more efficient for me to complete any task that are given by my friend, my teacher or my parents.

✓ It's just easier and more efficient for me to complete any task that is given by my friend, my teacher or my parents.

The subject 'any task' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are' to agree in number.