Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً وطبيعية، وقلل من التكرار. استخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة مع ربط الأفكار بكلمات وصل مناسبة.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I prepare for exams, I study regularly and revise the material at least once a month to ensure I remember it well.

Sugestão: تجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية مثل "umm" و"uh". حاول أن تقدم إجابة أكثر وضوحاً وتركيزاً مع تفاصيل داعمة.

Exemplo: Occasionally, I have forgotten important things, but it is rare because I usually revise the information thoroughly to help me remember.

Sugestão: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام كلمات ربط لجعل الإجابة أكثر سلاسة وطبيعية. كما يمكنك توضيح الفكرة بشكل أكثر تحديداً.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember various tasks, so I make a small checklist every morning. After completing each task, I mark it off, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugestão: تجنب التكرار في الكلام وركز على تقديم إجابة واضحة ومترابطة مع استخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة.

Exemplo: I usually remember important things by making a checklist at the start of the day, which helps me keep track of all the tasks I need to complete.

× I have an exam on October and I try my best to study and to to memorize the thing but I need to revise the things at least once a month to make sure I will be good and memorize it.

✓ I have an exam in October and I try my best to study and to memorize things but I need to revise them at least once a month to make sure I will be good and memorize them.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to months; 'in' should be used instead. Also, 'the thing' and 'the things' are vague and incorrect here; 'things' or 'them' is more appropriate. This is a preposition and article usage issue.

× Well, sometimes it's happened, but not usually.

✓ Well, sometimes it has happened, but not usually.

The phrase 'it's happened' is incorrect; the present perfect tense 'it has happened' should be used to indicate an action that occurred at an unspecified time in the past. This is a past tense issue.

× Actually what help me to remember the important thing to do on my day, it's to make a small checklist that morning and when I did all the things on the checklist I mark it.

✓ Actually, what helps me to remember the important things to do in my day is to make a small checklist in the morning, and when I have done all the things on the checklist, I mark them.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'what'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'On my day' should be 'in my day'. 'That morning' should be 'in the morning'. 'Did' should be 'have done' to indicate completed actions relevant to the present. 'Mark it' should be 'mark them' to agree with plural 'things'. This involves subject-verb agreement, preposition use, pronoun agreement, and tense issues.

× Usually I I make a checklist at the beginning of the day so that help to remember the things that need to be done at this day.

✓ Usually, I make a checklist at the beginning of the day so that it helps me to remember the things that need to be done that day.

The phrase 'so that help' is missing the subject 'it' and the verb should be 'helps' to agree with 'it'. 'At this day' is incorrect; 'that day' is appropriate. This is a pronoun and verb agreement issue as well as preposition misuse.