Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain briefly with clear and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word forms like 'memorizing it' at the end.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. Usually, I write important information in my diary or on my mobile phone to help me remember.

Sugestão: Your answer has some good content but the sentence structure and tenses are confusing. Try to organise your answer logically with correct grammar and linking words to make it clearer.

Exemplo: Yes, last month I forgot my dentist appointment. Fortunately, the doctor called me to remind me, and I remembered I had to go to Ludhiana to collect my dental reports.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same word 'timetable' too often. Also, correct small grammar mistakes like 'prepare timetable' should be 'prepare a timetable'.

Exemplo: I need to remember my daily schedule, so I prepare a timetable. Following it helps me manage my time effectively, and I think everyone benefits from having a timetable.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing like 'for membrane it'. Try to use correct expressions and avoid repetition. Also, give a clear and concise response.

Exemplo: I usually write important things in my diary or on my mobile phone because I tend to forget easily.

× Frankly speaking, not because I usually do not remember all things, so I write it on my diary or sometimes I write it on my mobile phone or memorizing it.

✓ Frankly speaking, no, because I usually do not remember all things, so I write it in my diary or sometimes I write it on my mobile phone or memorise it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'memorizing' at the end without a proper verb form or conjunction. It should be 'memorise it' to match the sentence structure. Also, 'not' alone is not a proper response; 'no' fits better here. Additionally, 'on my diary' should be 'in my diary' because we write inside a diary.

× Definitely last month I forgot my dentist appointment, then doctor called me that today is your appointment.

✓ Definitely, last month I forgot my dentist appointment, then the doctor called me to say that today was my appointment.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since the event happened in the past, 'is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'doctor' needs the definite article 'the' before it. The phrase 'called me that' is incorrect; it should be 'called me to say that'.

× That time I remember I went to Ludhiana for taking my reports from the dentist.

✓ At that time, I remembered I had gone to Ludhiana to collect my reports from the dentist.

The sentence mixes present tense 'remember' with past events. It should be 'remembered' to match past tense. Also, 'for taking my reports' is awkward; 'to collect my reports' is more natural. 'At that time' is a better phrase than 'That time'.

× Well, I prepare timetable for my daily schedule because I have no time to do another activity.

✓ Well, I prepare a timetable for my daily schedule because I have no time to do other activities.

The word 'timetable' is countable and needs an article 'a'. Also, 'another activity' is incorrect here because it implies one more activity; 'other activities' is more appropriate to indicate multiple possible activities.

× Well, I write it on my diary or sometimes I write it on my mobile phone for membrane it because I easily forgot things.

✓ Well, I write it in my diary or sometimes I write it on my mobile phone to remember it because I easily forget things.

'Membrane' is a misspelling of 'remember'. Also, 'for remember it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to remember it'. 'On my diary' should be 'in my diary'. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context.