Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，避免重复表达，并尝试使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: To be honest, I find it difficult to memorize things, whether they are important or trivial. I tend to be quite forgetful, so I always write down important information to remind myself.

Sugestão: 回答中信息表达不够清晰，句子过长且结构混乱。建议分句表达，注意语法和时态的正确使用，同时增加细节使内容更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot the exact time of an exam until my friends reminded me. It was already the night before the final exam, so I only had one night to review all the material.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，句子重复且不完整。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明原因。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my class timetable because my school has strict attendance rules. If I miss more than two classes, I won't be allowed to take the final exam.

Sugestão: 回答表达了方法，但用词不准确且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复，并清晰描述具体做法。

Exemplo: I usually keep records of important things. For example, I write notes on my phone's calendar or send reminders to my friends in WeChat chats to help me remember.

× I found myself have difficulty memorizing things no matter they are important or just small measures.

✓ I found myself having difficulty memorizing things no matter whether they are important or just small matters.

这里“found myself”后面应该接动名词形式“having”，表示“发现自己正在做某事”。另外，“small measures”应改为“small matters”，更符合语境。

× I tend to be a very forgettable per person.

✓ I tend to be a very forgetful person.

“forgettable”意思是“容易被遗忘的”，而这里应使用“forgetful”，表示“健忘的”。“per person”应为“person”。

× Yes, I have once forgotten the exact exam time until I was reminded by my friends as it was already the night before the final exam day and I only have one night to have a review of the whole knowledge have.

✓ Yes, I once forgot the exact exam time until I was reminded by my friends, as it was already the night before the final exam day and I only had one night to review all the knowledge.

“have once forgotten”时态不正确，应为一般过去时“once forgot”。“have a review”应改为“review”，更自然。句子结构也需调整以更通顺。

× I only have one night to have a review of the whole knowledge have.

✓ I only had one night to review all the knowledge.

“have a review of the whole knowledge have”结构不正确，应简化为“review all the knowledge”，且时态应与上下文一致。

× Since our school is strict, has strict regulation on our attendance record.

✓ Since our school is strict and has strict regulations on our attendance record.

句子缺少连词“and”，导致结构不完整。

× If failing to attend two more lessons sometime you will not be you will unable to attend the final exam.

✓ If you fail to attend more than two lessons sometimes, you will be unable to attend the final exam.

“two more lessons sometime”表达不清，应为“more than two lessons sometimes”。“will not be you will unable”语法错误，应为“you will be unable”。

× So I have to remember that exactly.

✓ So I have to remember that exactly.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× For me, I'll usually take some records of many important things.

✓ For me, I'll usually keep records of many important things.

“take some records”用法不当，应改为“keep records”，表示“保存记录”。

× I'll take a note on the calendar on my phone or just write something in the convention in the WeChat convention with my friends to have a good reminder of these important things.

✓ I'll make a note on the calendar on my phone or just write something in the WeChat conversation with my friends to have a good reminder of these important things.

“take a note”应为“make a note”。“convention”应为“conversation”，表示“对话”。