Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "my memory is quite good to remember"; instead, say "I have a good memory for". Also, try to use linking words to contrast ideas smoothly, for example, "However" instead of "But". Finally, try to provide a bit more specific detail to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a good memory for things like names, faces, and numbers. However, I find it harder to remember general information or stories in detail.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit confusing due to lack of clear structure and linking words. Try to organise your ideas into clear sentences, use linking words like "for example" or "however", and avoid unnecessary details that do not add clarity. Also, watch out for unclear phrases like "it was all shirt" which may confuse the listener.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, when I was younger, I forgot it was a holiday and went to school alone. However, nowadays this rarely happens unless I am very distracted.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but it could be more concise and natural. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your sentences smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary, for example, instead of "I find it quite hard", you could say "I often struggle to remember".

Exemplo: I need to remember to take my vitamins and medication every day. Because I often get distracted, I set multiple alarms on my phone to remind me, otherwise I might forget.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and includes a good example, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid informal phrases like "if you know what I mean" in formal speaking tests. Also, try to use linking words such as "for instance" or "however" to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I remember important things by memorising them. For instance, I know my mum's birthday is on 14th January. If I forget to wish her, it's usually because I'm distracted, not because I don't remember the date.

× Yes I have, especially when I was younger one day I went to school and was exam day and I did not prepare at all and this other time it was a holiday and I completely forgot about it so I was the only one at school and it was all shirt.

✓ Yes I have, especially when I was younger. One day I went to school and it was exam day and I did not prepare at all. Another time, it was a holiday and I completely forgot about it, so I was the only one at school and it was all quiet.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions, which makes it confusing. Also, 'was exam day' should be 'it was exam day' to be grammatically correct. 'This other time' should be 'Another time' for clarity. 'It was all shirt' seems to be a typo and should be 'it was all quiet'. Breaking the sentence into smaller parts and correcting these issues improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Nowadays it's rare that would happen but if I'm distracted by getting the information then yes.

✓ Nowadays it's rare that would happen, but if I'm distracted while getting the information, then yes.

The phrase 'distracted by getting the information' is awkward and incorrect. The correct preposition here is 'while' to indicate the time during which the distraction occurs. Adding a comma before 'but' improves sentence flow.