Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“remember”应为“remembering”，“I'm struck”表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的表达方式。此外，句子结构较为混乱，建议简洁明了地表达观点。

Exemplo: I don't think I am good at memorising things because I often struggle to remember them. Therefore, I usually rely on reminders to help me keep track of what I need to do.

Sugestão: 回答中时态使用不当，如“I forget”和“I forgotten”应改为“I forgot”。句子结构不完整且表达不够连贯，建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important exam date. It was a very important exam, but I stayed up late the night before and completely forgot about it.

Sugestão: 回答内容较丰富，但最后一句不完整，缺少具体信息。建议避免重复使用“and”，可以用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时补充完整信息。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments and deadlines because they help me stay organised and avoid missing anything. I also need to memorise study materials like formulas and vocabulary to prepare for exams. Besides school, I have to remember passwords for my various accounts.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少必要的细节和连贯性。建议完整表达方法，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Exemplo: For things that are easy to remember, like my phone password, I just use them frequently and remember them naturally. However, for difficult passwords, such as those for websites or my email, I usually write them down or use a password manager to help me remember.

× I don't think I am good at remember things.

✓ I don't think I am good at remembering things.

动词短语 'good at' 后面应该接动名词形式，不能用动词原形。这里 'remember' 应改为 'remembering'。

× I'm struck because I'm struggled to memory the things and I need to rely on the reminders to remember what I need to do.

✓ I'm stuck because I struggle to memorize things and I need to rely on reminders to remember what I need to do.

时态使用错误，'I'm struggled' 应为一般现在时 'I struggle'，且 'struck' 应为 'stuck'，'memory' 应为动词 'memorize'。

× Oh yes, that's unforgettable experience. I forget. I forgotten my exam date once and it's a quite important exam but the night before the day I stayed up late so I forgot it.

✓ Oh yes, that's an unforgettable experience. I forgot my exam date once and it was quite an important exam, but the night before I stayed up late so I forgot it.

时态错误，'I forget' 应为过去式 'I forgot'，'I forgotten' 是过去分词，需用过去式 'forgot'。另外，冠词 'an' 缺失，'it's a quite important exam' 应为 'it was quite an important exam'。

× And besides school, I also need to remember the password of my.

✓ And besides school, I also need to remember the password of mine.

句子结构不完整，'the password of my' 缺少名词，正确表达应为 'the password of mine' 或 'my password'。

× But for something that's hard to remember, like the difficult password of some website or my e-mail I need to take.

✓ But for something that's hard to remember, like the difficult password of some website or my e-mail, I need to take notes.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，'I need to take' 后应补充宾语，如 'notes'。