Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and structured. Avoid repetition such as "I I" and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your points with specific examples to make your answer more effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising, especially when the information is visual. For instance, I can easily remember diagrams or pictures, but I find it harder to recall spoken information.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, about a year and a half ago, I missed an appointment because I didn't see the calls or messages reminding me.

Sugestão: Your answer includes relevant details but contains grammatical errors and informal expressions. Try to use correct grammar and more formal vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details linked logically.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to call my parents, study regularly for university, and take my medication on time because my mother insists on it.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid filler words like "umm" and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use correct verb forms to improve accuracy.

Exemplo: I usually write down important tasks in my daily list or planner to help me remember them and avoid forgetting.

× I'm very good at memorizing things especially the text and I'm a very visual person by memorizing them.

✓ I'm very good at memorizing things, especially texts, and I'm a very visual person who memorizes them.

The phrase 'by memorizing them' is incorrectly used here. Instead, use a relative clause 'who memorizes them' to describe the person. Also, 'the text' should be plural 'texts' to generalize the statement.

× Like if you give me something that is visual I can remember it fully but if someone say it to me I I can't tell anything.

✓ Like if you give me something that is visual, I can remember it fully, but if someone says it to me, I can't tell anything.

The verb 'say' should be in third person singular form 'says' to agree with 'someone'. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× Of course, yes, even I remember the time that I forgot it, it was about like 1 1/2 year ago and it was about the appointment that I take and that I took and I forgot about it and they called me and texted me and I didn't see anything.

✓ Of course, yes, I even remember the time that I forgot it; it was about one and a half years ago, and it was about an appointment that I took and forgot about. They called me and texted me, but I didn't see anything.

The sentence has tense inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. 'Take' should be past tense 'took'. '1 1/2 year' should be plural 'years'. Also, the sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× I need to remember some things such as calling my parents and studying every day from my university and take my pills and tablets because my mom's kill me if I'm not take them.

✓ I need to remember some things such as calling my parents, studying every day at my university, and taking my pills and tablets because my mom will kill me if I don't take them.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect; 'at' is appropriate for location. Also, 'take' should be 'taking' to maintain parallel structure. 'I'm not take' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't take'. 'Mom's kill me' is incorrect; it should be 'mom will kill me'.

× I'm a person that writes everything to remember, so if I have to remember something, I have to write it in my umm daily list and planner to remember it and not forgot about it.

✓ I'm a person who writes everything down to remember, so if I have to remember something, I write it in my daily list and planner to remember it and not forget about it.

Use 'who' instead of 'that' for people. 'Write everything to remember' is awkward; 'write everything down to remember' is correct. 'Not forgot' should be 'not forget' to match the infinitive form.