Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making sentences more concise. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'which', say 'things that are important to me'.

Exemplo: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I use my mobile phone to note down important items. For instance, when I need to buy groceries, I write them in my notepad app to remember them easily.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use past tense correctly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve fluency.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten many things. For example, last weekend I missed a doctor's appointment because I didn't write it down in my notepad app. As a result, I felt very embarrassed and regretful about the situation.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid unnecessary details and focus on specific examples of what you need to remember daily.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember several things because my parents rely on me. For instance, I have to buy groceries and sometimes chocolates when I go to the market. Besides that, I also remember to maintain personal hygiene, like bathing and brushing my teeth every day.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to memory techniques.

Exemplo: To remember important things, I usually write them down in a notepad app on my phone. This method is very convenient because I can carry my phone everywhere and easily access or edit my notes whenever needed.

× I have some notes and in my mobile phone in which I noted down the things which which is which are important to me.

✓ I have some notes in my mobile phone in which I have noted down the things that are important to me.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect use of pronouns 'which which is which are'. It should be simplified to 'that are' to correctly refer to the plural noun 'things'. Also, 'and in my mobile phone' is misplaced and should be 'in my mobile phone'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I haven't write it down in my notepad app.

✓ I haven't written it down in my notepad app.

After 'haven't' (have not), the verb should be in the past participle form. 'Write' is the base form; the correct past participle is 'written'. Hence, 'haven't write' is incorrect; it should be 'haven't written'.

× I feel very shameful and embarrassed by this situation.

✓ I feel very ashamed and embarrassed by this situation.

The adjective 'shameful' means causing shame to others, whereas 'ashamed' means feeling shame oneself. Since the speaker is describing their own feelings, 'ashamed' is the correct word to use.

× I have to buy some something like chocolates and other things and bathing daily and brush is the also a part of daily.

✓ I have to buy things like chocolates and other items, and bathing daily and brushing are also part of my routine.

The sentence has issues with singular/plural forms and unclear structure. 'Some something' is incorrect; 'things like' is better. 'Brush is the also a part of daily' is incorrect; 'brushing' (gerund) should be used and matched with 'bathing' as plural subjects with 'are'. This correction improves grammatical agreement and clarity.

× I do a lot of things to remember the things as sometimes I write it down in my remember notepad app.

✓ I do a lot of things to remember things, such as sometimes writing them down in my notepad app.

The phrase 'in my remember notepad app' is awkward and incorrect. 'Remember' is not used as an adjective here. Also, 'write it down' should be generalized to 'writing them down' to match plural 'things'. The correction improves prepositional and phrase usage.

× I can open it instantly and edit the things according to it.

✓ I can open it instantly and edit the notes accordingly.

'Edit the things according to it' is unclear and awkward. 'Notes' is a better noun here, and 'accordingly' is the correct adverb to indicate editing based on the content. This correction improves clarity and pronoun reference.