Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan mengandung pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan kalimat utama yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, kemudian tambahkan detail pendukung yang relevan tanpa mengulang informasi yang sama.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details quickly. For instance, I often forget what I did just moments ago, which makes it hard for me to remember information effectively.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah memberikan contoh, tetapi kalimatnya kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan perbaiki tata bahasa agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things in my daily life. For example, I sometimes forget to bring my keys or phone to school, which surprises my friends because it's unusual for me.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan kalimatnya tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan lengkap dengan struktur yang baik, serta gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan pentingnya keluarga.

Exemplo: In my daily life, the most important thing I need to remember is my family because they are always there to support me, especially when I feel sad or face difficulties.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung pengulangan dan kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan kalimat yang benar secara tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Exemplo: I remember important things by making plans or schedules. This helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget what I need to do.

× Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things because I always forgot what I did.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing things because I always forget what I did.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used.

× What did I say before? Like instantly I just forgot what did I do before?

✓ What did I say before? Like instantly I just forgot what I did before.

In indirect questions, the auxiliary verb 'did' is not used. The correct form is 'what I did before' instead of 'what did I do before'.

× Yeah, it's often I forget something important that for my life.

✓ Yeah, I often forget something important in my life.

The phrase 'it's often I forget' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'I often forget'. Also, 'that for my life' is incorrect; it should be 'in my life'.

× For example, I forgot to bring a key or bring a phone at school.

✓ For example, I forgot to bring a key or a phone to school.

The verb 'forgot' is correct in past tense here, but 'bring a phone' should be parallel with 'bring a key' and 'at school' should be 'to school'.

× That's why my friend just confused how can I forgot to bring my phone at school?

✓ That's why my friend is just confused about how I could forget to bring my phone to school.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'my friend just confused' should be 'my friend is just confused'. Also, indirect question form 'how can I forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'how I could forget'.

× The most important thing was family, so I would say the most you need to remember was your family, who always beside you, support you and many kids when you're sad, when you have.

✓ The most important thing is family, so I would say the most you need to remember is your family, who is always beside you, supports you and helps you when you're sad.

The tense should be present ('is' instead of 'was') because it refers to a general truth. Also, subject-verb agreement errors with 'who always beside you' and 'support you' need correction.

× The answer is to make a plans or make a schedule that you should do.

✓ The answer is to make a plan or make a schedule that you should follow.

'A plans' is incorrect because 'plans' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'a plan'.

× You know that that is was important things right?

✓ You know that that is an important thing, right?

'Important things' is plural but preceded by 'is' which is singular. It should be 'an important thing'.

× So you should make a schedules about that or make a plan at least.

✓ So you should make a schedule about that or make a plan at least.

'A schedules' is incorrect because 'schedules' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'a schedule'.