Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit confusing due to grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to give a clear, concise response directly addressing the question, and use simple, correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and focus on one clear example with proper linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, last week my mother lost her glasses, and I remembered where I saw them, so I helped her find them quickly.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your sentences. Also, be specific about what you forgot and how you felt. Keep your sentences simple and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. For instance, once I left my files in the living room and forgot about them. I felt upset but finally found them after searching carefully.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to directly state what you need to remember daily, and give specific examples with clear linking words. Use simple and correct sentence structures to improve clarity.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and activities. For example, I always remember to do yoga and exercise at 6:00 PM because it is part of my routine.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear vocabulary and sentence structure. Try to express your ideas more simply and clearly. Explain your method of remembering important things step by step, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I remember important things by concentrating in a quiet place without distractions. This helps me focus and avoid feeling stressed or confused.

× Yes, of course I felt that I am very good in memorising the things.

✓ Yes, of course I feel that I am very good at memorising things.

The sentence mixes past tense 'felt' with present tense 'am'. Since the question is about current ability, present tense 'feel' is appropriate. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'good at' is the correct phrase.

× Like last week my mother had just forgotten their spectrum anywhere.

✓ Like last week my mother had just forgotten her spectacles somewhere.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect when referring to 'my mother' (singular). It should be 'her'. Also, 'spectrum' is likely a misused word; 'spectacles' (glasses) fits the context better. 'Anywhere' is better replaced with 'somewhere' for clarity.

× But at that time I had just watched it and my mother was very sad because they forget it.

✓ But at that time I had just seen it and my mother was very sad because she forgot it.

The verb 'watched' is not appropriate for finding a lost item; 'seen' is better. Also, 'they forget it' is incorrect; 'she forgot it' matches the singular subject and past tense.

× But when I found it for that they she also asked from me.

✓ But when I found it, she also asked me for it.

The sentence has confusing pronouns 'they she' and incorrect preposition 'asked from me'. Correct pronouns and prepositions are needed: 'she asked me for it'.

× But I remember it and I found it.

✓ But I remembered it and I found it.

The sentence mixes present tense 'remember' with past tense 'found'. Since the event is in the past, both verbs should be in past tense.

× One day I had just put my files in my drawing room, but suddenly I don't know, I just forget about it and I feel very upset.

✓ One day I had just put my files in my drawing room, but suddenly I don't know, I just forgot about it and I felt very upset.

The verbs 'forget' and 'feel' should be in past tense 'forgot' and 'felt' to match the past event described.

× So I have found in my old homes but I never get it.

✓ So I searched in my old home but I never found it.

The present perfect 'have found' is incorrect here; 'searched' fits better. Also, 'get it' should be 'found it' to indicate locating the item.

× Finally I came in such a rooms and got it.

✓ Finally I came into such a room and got it.

The phrase 'came in such a rooms' is incorrect; 'came into such a room' is correct. Also, 'rooms' should be singular to match 'a'.

× Well, I felt that which activities, which files which task activities is quite significant for me that I need to remember in our daily in my daily life.

✓ Well, I feel that the activities, files, and tasks that are quite significant to me are what I need to remember in my daily life.

The sentence has incorrect pronouns and articles. 'I felt' should be 'I feel' for present opinion. 'Which' is misused; 'the' is appropriate. Also, 'our daily in my daily life' is redundant; 'my daily life' suffices.

× For example, like yoga, exercise shop 6:00 PM, it's my part of a schedule that I never forget in my life.

✓ For example, yoga and exercise at 6:00 PM are part of my schedule that I never forget.

The phrase 'exercise shop 6:00 PM' is unclear; 'exercise at 6:00 PM' is correct. Also, 'it's my part of a schedule' is awkward; 'are part of my schedule' is better.

× Well, I felt that I remember such a things after do or concentration in a transcooli place so that no one disturbance to me in case if any type of frustrations, soreness in my mind that that it's not help to me to find out my things, it's just to create a irritation.

✓ Well, I feel that I remember such things after doing concentration in a tranquil place so that no one disturbs me. If there is any frustration or soreness in my mind, it does not help me find my things; it just creates irritation.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and article errors. 'I felt' should be 'I feel' for present opinion. 'Such a things' should be 'such things'. 'Do or concentration' should be 'doing concentration'. 'Transcooli' is likely 'tranquil'. 'No one disturbance to me' should be 'no one disturbs me'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And at that time I just feel very dizzy.

✓ And at that time I just felt very dizzy.

The verb 'feel' should be in past tense 'felt' to match the past event. The adverb 'just' placement is acceptable.