Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使用更准确的词汇表达记忆能力的变化。

Exemplo: I was good at memorising things when I was four, but I didn't practice regularly. Now, I find it harder to remember things, which makes me disappointed.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用连贯的句子结构，明确表达忘记重要事情的原因和教训。

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things. For example, I planned many tests for a project but forgot some because I didn't write them down. This taught me the importance of keeping a to-do list.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，建议明确列举日常需要记住的具体事项，避免无关内容。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my plans and tasks to complete, such as work assignments and appointments.

Sugestão: 回答表达基本清晰，但语法和用词有待改进，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

Exemplo: I usually write important things down because it's a convenient and effective way to remember them. For example, before meetings, I jot down notes in my notebook to remind myself.

× When I was four years old, I was very good at memory things, but at that time I didn't practice it regret regularly.

✓ When I was four years old, I was very good at memorising things, but at that time I didn't practice it regularly.

这里'memory things'用法错误，应该用动名词形式'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。动词后接动名词是固定搭配。

× but at that time I didn't practice it regret regularly.

✓ but at that time I didn't practice it regularly.

'regret'是名词或动词，这里用作副词不正确，应去掉。

× So I find it's difficult for me to remember things right now, so it it makes me very disappointed.

✓ So I find it's difficult for me to remember things right now, which makes me very disappointed.

句子中重复使用'so'导致结构混乱，应使用关系代词'which'连接两个分句，使句子更通顺。

× once I planned many tests for a project, but because I didn't have the habits habit of writing them down so I end up forgetting some of them,

✓ once I planned many tests for a project, but because I didn't have the habit of writing them down, I ended up forgetting some of them,

'habits habit'重复且用复数不当，应改为单数'habit'。另外，'end up'应使用过去式'end up'的过去式'end up'的过去式是'end up'，但这里应用过去式'end up'的过去式是'end up'，应改为'ended up'。

× so I end up forgetting some of them, it taught me the importance of keeping To Do List to stick.

✓ so I ended up forgetting some of them, it taught me the importance of keeping a To-Do List to stick to.

'end up'应使用过去式'ended up'，'To Do List'前应加冠词'a'，'to stick'应改为'to stick to'，表示坚持做某事。

× I need to remember my everyday plans and I have to think how to make it perfect and other things like the jobs I have to made it and other important celebrity.

✓ I need to remember my everyday plans and I have to think about how to make them perfect and other things like the jobs I have to do and other important matters.

'make it perfect'中的'it'应改为复数'them'，因为指代'plans'；'have to made it'时态错误，应为'have to do it'；'celebrity'用词不当，应改为'matters'或'important things'。

× I have to think how to make it perfect and other things like the jobs I have to made it and other important celebrity.

✓ I have to think about how to make them perfect and other things like the jobs I have to do and other important matters.

'have to made'时态错误，'have to'后应接动词原形'do'。

× Regularly I really write them down because I think it is very convenient and is effective way to remember important things.

✓ I regularly write them down because I think it is a very convenient and effective way to remember important things.

'Regularly I really write'语序不当，应改为'I regularly write'；'is effective way'前缺少冠词'a'。

× For example, before I entered a meeting and I usually write in a notebook and remind me.

✓ For example, before I enter a meeting, I usually write in a notebook to remind myself.

'before I entered'时态不一致，应与一般现在时保持一致；'remind me'缺少反身代词，应为'remind myself'。

× I think it's help me remember back.

✓ I think it helps me remember.

'it's help'主谓不一致，应为'it helps'；'remember back'用法不当，'remember'本身含有回忆意思，无需加'back'。