Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 질문에 직접적으로 답하지 않았습니다. 좀 더 간결하고 명확하게 자신의 의견을 표현하고, 문장 구조를 개선해야 합니다.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it stressful and prefer to focus on understanding rather than rote learning.

Sugestão: 답변이 다소 모호하고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 구체적인 예시를 들어 질문에 직접 답하고, 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot the time to meet my friends because I struggle with memorising schedules.

Sugestão: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 일상에서 기억해야 하는 구체적인 내용을 명확하게 표현하고, 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks for the day because my schedule as a university student changes frequently.

Sugestão: 답변이 다소 반복적이고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 더 자연스럽고 정확한 표현으로 자신의 방법을 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Since I'm not good at memorising, I usually write important things down on paper notes to help me remember them.

× I think it's all not good to memorize things because I don't like training my days or my future and because it's it's stressful for me.

✓ I think it's not good to memorize things because I don't like planning my days or my future and because it's stressful for me.

'Training my days or my future' is incorrect usage; the correct verb is 'planning' to express organizing or preparing for days or future. The error is related to incorrect verb form and word choice, which fits under 'Verb in the present participle form'.

× So I don't like, I'm not going to use this.

✓ So I don't like it, and I'm not going to use it.

The sentence lacks the object 'it' after 'like' and 'use'. Adding 'it' clarifies the meaning. Also, connecting the two clauses with 'and' improves sentence structure. This is related to verb usage and sentence structure.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important like the time I meet my friends or I get to the school because as I say, I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important like the time I met my friends or when I got to school because, as I said, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The verbs 'meet' and 'get' should be in past tense 'met' and 'got' to match the past event. Also, 'as I say' should be 'as I said' to refer to past statement. This is a past tense issue.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important like the time I meet my friends or I get to the school because as I say, I'm not good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important like the time I met my friends or when I got to school because, as I said, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'the school' is incorrect here; 'school' without 'the' is appropriate when referring to the institution in general. This is an article error.

× So this is my this other.

✓ So this is my problem.

The phrase 'this is my this other' is unclear and ungrammatical. Replacing it with 'this is my problem' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× In daily life, I have to remember. What I have to do that on that day because my students and university students, so my days always have changed it on that day.

✓ In daily life, I have to remember what I have to do on that day because I am a student at university, so my days always change on that day.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining sentences and correcting phrases like 'my students and university students' to 'I am a student at university' improves clarity and grammar. Also, 'have changed it' is incorrect; 'always change' is correct for habitual action.

× As I say, I'm not good at memorizing something important.

✓ As I said, I'm not good at memorizing important things.

'As I say' should be 'As I said' to refer to a previous statement. Also, 'something important' is better expressed as 'important things' for generalization. This is a past tense and noun usage issue.

× So to remember important things, I usually bring up my paper modes and in paper notes I write down the important things.

✓ So to remember important things, I usually bring my paper notes and write down the important things in them.

'Bring up my paper modes' is incorrect; 'bring my paper notes' is correct. Also, 'in paper notes' should be 'in them' referring to notes. This is an article and word choice error.