Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa serta pengulangan yang tidak perlu. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk menghubungkan ide. Misalnya, jelaskan kemampuan menghafal Anda dengan contoh spesifik dan kalimat yang terstruktur dengan baik.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I learn new vocabulary, I repeat the words several times to help me remember them better.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang tidak lengkap sehingga sulit dipahami. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta gunakan contoh yang spesifik dan relevan. Hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot my new key case, which was necessary because I needed it to open my room.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik namun masih ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang jelas. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda dengan lebih baik.

Exemplo: In my daily life, the most important thing I need to remember is my appointments. Since I often schedule meetings with several people, I have to attend them and provide feedback afterwards.

Sugestão: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat pengulangan kata serta kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan metode Anda mengingat hal penting dengan lebih baik.

Exemplo: I usually remember important things by using my schedule. I make a daily to-do list, so I know what tasks or appointments are important each day.

× I'm good at memorizing thing for because when I know about the something new, it's very necessary for me and I can keep it for several times such As for few minutes.

✓ I'm good at memorizing things because when I learn something new, it's very necessary for me and I can keep it for several times, such as for a few minutes.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'the something new' is incorrect; it should be 'something new' without 'the'. 'As for few minutes' should be 'such as for a few minutes' to correctly express the example.

× For example, if I learn about the new vocabularies, I will repeat it for.

✓ For example, if I learn new vocabulary, I will repeat it.

The word 'vocabularies' is incorrect; 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'repeat it for' which is incomplete; it should end simply as 'repeat it' or specify the duration.

× I have ever forgot about the my new case.

✓ I have ever forgotten about my new case.

The past participle of 'forget' is 'forgotten', not 'forgot' when used with 'have'. Also, 'the my' is incorrect; it should be just 'my'.

× I have ever forgot about the my new case.

✓ I have ever forgotten about my new case.

The phrase 'the my' is incorrect because 'my' is a possessive adjective and does not require 'the' before it.

× Well, I think the most important to remember in my daily life is my appointment, because when I make a appointment for several people, I have to attend it and I will have to.

✓ Well, I think the most important thing to remember in my daily life is my appointments, because when I make appointments for several people, I have to attend them and I will have to.

'Appointment' should be plural 'appointments' when referring to multiple. Also, 'a appointment' is incorrect; it should be 'an appointment'. The sentence is incomplete at the end and should be completed for clarity.

× I must give them some feedback about it so I can send it by myself.

✓ I must give them some feedback about it so I can send it myself.

The phrase 'send it by myself' is incorrect; 'by myself' implies doing something alone, but here 'myself' is the correct reflexive pronoun to indicate the subject performs the action.

× Well, I usually remember important thing for such as how to how to make appointment for for it, I usually use my schedule and I have the list for daily activities about one day.

✓ Well, I usually remember important things, such as how to make appointments for them. I usually use my schedule and I have a list of daily activities for one day.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things'. 'Make appointment' should be 'make appointments'. 'The list for daily activities about one day' is awkward; it should be 'a list of daily activities for one day'.