Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数，避免重复表达，使回答更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when I was in high school, I had to remember a lot of information about history and politics, so I practiced memorising facts and writing them down.

Sugestão: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并用连接词组织细节，使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: I rarely forget important things because I always make lists and add reminders to my calendar. This helps me keep track of everything I need to do.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，影响理解。建议注意单复数和时态，句子结构要完整，表达要具体清晰。

Exemplo: Recently, I have been preparing for an important test, so I need to remember many new vocabulary words and useful phrases for reading and writing.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，清晰描述记忆方法。

Exemplo: I use several methods to remember important things. First, I write them down in a small notebook. Also, I add reminders to my phone's daily calendar so I can check them anytime.

× And years ago, when I was started in high school, we had a lot of things need to remember, like about histories in politics that are there are a lot of knowledge that we need to remember and to write down.

✓ And years ago, when I started high school, we had a lot of things to remember, like history and politics; there was a lot of knowledge that we needed to remember and write down.

这里“was started”使用了错误的过去时态，正确的表达应该是“started”，表示过去发生的动作。此外，“need to remember”应改为不定式“to remember”，符合句子结构。

× like about histories in politics that are there are a lot of knowledge that we need to remember and to write down.

✓ like history and politics; there was a lot of knowledge that we needed to remember and write down.

“like about histories in politics”中“about”使用不当，应直接用“like history and politics”表示举例。

× So at that time, I'm good at memorizing.

✓ So at that time, I was good at memorizing.

“at that time”指过去时间，谓语动词应使用过去时态“was”而非现在时“am”。

× Oh well, I will say seldom I had the most important things.

✓ Oh well, I would say I seldom had the most important things.

“will say”应改为“would say”表示假设语气；“seldom I had”语序错误，应为“I seldom had”。

× I will I will always take make a list to remember it and I would also add it on my calendars and I would also always track it.

✓ I will always make a list to remember it, and I would also add it to my calendar and always track it.

“take make a list”重复且错误，应为“make a list”；“add it on my calendars”应为“add it to my calendar”，介词使用错误且calendar通常用单数。

× I would also add it on my calendars

✓ I would also add it to my calendar

动词“add”后应接介词“to”而非“on”，且“calendar”通常用单数。

× I was hardly to remember something important.

✓ I hardly remembered something important.

“was hardly to remember”结构错误，应使用过去时态动词“remembered”并去掉“to”。

× So there are a lot of new vocabulary I need to remember and also in reading, in writing there are so many phrases that needs me to remember that.

✓ So there is a lot of new vocabulary I need to remember, and also in reading and writing there are many phrases that I need to remember.

“a lot of new vocabulary”中“vocabulary”是不可数名词，应使用单数动词“is”；“so many phrases that needs me to remember”中“needs”应改为“need”，“me to remember”语序错误，应为“I need to remember”。

× there are so many phrases that needs me to remember that.

✓ there are so many phrases that I need to remember.

关系从句中主语是“phrases”，复数，谓语动词应为“need”而非“needs”；“me to remember”应改为“I need to remember”。

× I will write it down on my notebook in it's a small, small, small books.

✓ I will write it down in my notebook; it's a small, small, small book.

“write down”后应接介词“in”表示写在某物里面；“notebook”是单数，后面应为“book”而非“books”。

× I will add, add the important things to in my, on my phones daily calendar so that I can check it on my phone.

✓ I will add the important things to my phone's daily calendar so that I can check it on my phone.

“to in my, on my phones daily calendar”介词混乱，应为“to my phone's daily calendar”；“phones”应为所有格“phone's”。