Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确时态，并简洁明了地表达观点。

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often lose my belongings, and when I have to memorise a text, I usually forget it quickly.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰，且缺乏连贯性。建议练习正确使用过去时态和完整句子，避免重复和语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, last time I went to an exam, I forgot to bring my ID card. Fortunately, I still managed to pass the exam.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够具体，语法和表达有误。建议明确表达需要记住的具体内容，并使用连贯的句子。

Exemplo: I need to remember my lessons at school. Also, I have to learn and memorise a lot of knowledge to prepare for my exams.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误多，表达混乱。建议使用简单清晰的句子，说明具体方法，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

Exemplo: I remember important things by writing them in my planner or using apps that help me make lists. I also tell my friends and parents so they can remind me.

× No I not.

✓ No, I am not.

句子缺少助动词“am”，主语“I”需要与动词“am”搭配，表示否定时应使用“am not”。

× I often lost my things and when I when I have to memorize a text I will always forget it.

✓ I often lose my things and when I have to memorize a text I always forget it.

“often”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“lose”，而不是过去时“lost”。“will always forget”改为“一般现在时”更符合习惯表达。

× Yes, last time I go to an exam I I even forget bring Mike certification.

✓ Yes, last time I went to an exam I even forgot to bring Mike's certification.

“last time”表示过去时间，动词应使用过去时，“go”改为“went”，“forget”改为“forgot”，并且“forget bring”应改为“forgot to bring”。

× So I I pop I passed the exam.

✓ So I passed the exam.

句子中多余的词“pop I”导致结构混乱，应删除，保持句子简洁完整。

× I need to remember the my thoughts in the school.

✓ I need to remember my thoughts at school.

“the my”重复使用定冠词和物主代词错误，应去掉“the”。“in the school”改为“at school”更符合习惯用法。

× Also I need to learn and remember a lot of knowledge is says which can make me party exam.

✓ Also I need to learn and remember a lot of knowledge which can help me pass exams.

“knowledge is says”不合语法，应改为“knowledge which can help”。“party exam”应为“pass exams”，表达通过考试的意思。

× By writing this Saints in my planner or I will chose app says which can run list my something I can reminding my and I will told my friends and parents has say well.

✓ By writing these things in my planner or I will choose apps which can run lists for me to remind me, and I will tell my friends and parents as well.

“this Saints”应为“these things”，“chose”应为“choose”，“app says”应为“apps”，“run list my something”表达混乱，改为“run lists for me to remind me”。“told”改为“tell”，“has say well”应为“as well”。

× I will told my friends and parents has say well.

✓ I will tell my friends and parents as well.

“will”后应接动词原形“tell”，而不是过去式“told”。“has say well”表达错误，应为“as well”。