Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more concise and structured by stating your ability clearly, then giving a reason or example. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing, especially short-term information. I developed this skill from a young age because I often need to memorize material for school exams.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your sentences more fluent.

Exemplo: Not really, because I usually make a list and write important things in my journal or timetable. Therefore, it's rare for me to forget anything important.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Currently, I am healthy and have many exams every week for different subjects. Therefore, it's important for me to remember the exam dates and prepare for them accordingly.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, explain your method, and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: To remember important things, I use a timetable because it helps me stay organized. This method has been very helpful in my life, and I recommend it to anyone who needs to keep track of important tasks.

× Yes, I can say that I'm pretty good at memorizing things, especially like short term memorized.

✓ Yes, I can say that I'm pretty good at memorizing things, especially short-term memorizing.

The phrase 'short term memorized' is incorrect because 'memorized' is a past participle and does not fit here. The correct form is the gerund 'memorizing' to match the context of skills or activities. Also, 'short term' should be hyphenated as 'short-term' when used as an adjective.

× Because I need to I need to use my short term memorize thing to cope with my school exam.

✓ Because I need to use my short-term memory to cope with my school exams.

The original sentence is repetitive and awkwardly structured. 'Short term memorize thing' is incorrect; the correct noun phrase is 'short-term memory.' Also, 'school exam' should be pluralized to 'school exams' to indicate multiple exams.

× So let's kind of a skill that I built from a very young age.

✓ So it's kind of a skill that I have built from a very young age.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb. 'Let's' is incorrect here; it should be 'it's' (it is). Also, 'built' should be in present perfect tense 'have built' to indicate an action started in the past and continuing to the present.

× Usually the really important things that I would just have a list and write it down on my journal, my timetable.

✓ Usually, for the really important things, I just make a list and write it down in my journal or timetable.

The original sentence is awkward and missing prepositions. 'Have a list' is better expressed as 'make a list.' Also, 'write it down on my journal' should be 'write it down in my journal.' The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× For now I'm in great health so I have a lot of exam in every day, every week for a different subject.

✓ For now, I'm in great health, so I have a lot of exams every day and every week for different subjects.

'Exam' should be plural 'exams' because it refers to multiple tests. Also, 'a lot of exam in every day' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of exams every day.' 'For a different subject' should be plural 'for different subjects' to match the plural exams.

× So it's really important for me to remember what date, what exam I'm going to take an remember to study them.

✓ So it's really important for me to remember the dates and which exams I'm going to take and to remember to study for them.

The original sentence is awkward and missing articles and conjunctions. 'What date, what exam' should be 'the dates and which exams.' Also, 'an remember' is a typo and should be 'and to remember.' 'Study them' is better expressed as 'study for them.'

× For every member is important things.

✓ For remembering important things,

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It seems the speaker meant to say 'For remembering important things,' which is a proper phrase to start the explanation.

× I think a timetable will just help you stay organized so well and it's so helpful.

✓ I think a timetable will help you stay organized very well, and it's very helpful.

The phrase 'so well' is awkward here; 'very well' is more appropriate. Also, 'so helpful' is better as 'very helpful' for formal speech.

× So it's really helpful for my life and I would really recommend you to have one if you need to remember something really important.

✓ So it's really helpful in my life, and I would really recommend that you have one if you need to remember something really important.

The phrase 'helpful for my life' is better as 'helpful in my life.' Also, 'recommend you to have one' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'recommend that you have one.'