Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
I don't think I could have memorizing things. For example, sometimes I just send a message to my boyfriend and then seconds later I forgot what I've sent. And this happens quite often because I get distracted easily.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
No, I don't think I've ever forgotten something important. Just as I mentioned, I'm not quite good at memorizing things, but when it comes to some some more expensive important things, some vital things, I don't think. Maybe I've never forgot those.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Since I'm a college student now in like every day off busy doing my essays so I'll make sure I don't forget those studios. Yes that that line is soft. My acid submit man.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I think I wouldn't take certain methods to make sure I won't forget those important things 'cause they're so by torn important, so important that I won't forget. Like I don't need to take any measure.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如时态和动词形式使用不当,且表达不够自然流畅。建议加强语法基础,避免重复表达,并使用更准确的词汇。
Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often send messages to my boyfriend and then quickly forget what I wrote because I get distracted easily.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇,表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题,注意时态和词汇的准确使用。
Exemplo: No, I don't think I've ever forgotten anything important. Although I struggle with memorising, I always remember vital things.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: 回答内容混乱,语句不完整,难以理解。建议练习组织语言,确保回答简洁且有逻辑,避免无关或错误的词汇。
Exemplo: As a college student, I need to remember to complete my essays and attend my classes every day.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答中表达不清,语法和词汇使用不当。建议学习如何描述记忆方法,并使用连贯的句子表达观点。
Exemplo: I don't use special methods to remember important things because they are so important that I naturally remember them.
× I don't think I could have memorizing things.
✓ I don't think I could memorize things.
动词后面不能直接接动名词形式(memorizing),这里应该用动词原形(memorize)。
× seconds later I forgot what I've sent.
✓ seconds later I forgot what I'd sent.
这里描述过去发生的动作,应该用过去完成时(I'd sent)表示在过去某一时间之前已经完成的动作。
× Maybe I've never forgot those.
✓ Maybe I've never forgotten those.
现在完成时中,动词的过去分词形式应为forgotten,而不是简单过去式forgot。
× Since I'm a college student now in like every day off busy doing my essays so I'll make sure I don't forget those studios.
✓ Since I'm a college student now, I'm busy doing my essays almost every day off, so I'll make sure I don't forget those studies.
介词使用不当,'in like every day off'不符合习惯表达,应改为'almost every day off'。另外,'studios'应为'studies'。
× My acid submit man.
✓ (此句不明确,建议删除或重述)
该句无明确语义,可能是发音或拼写错误,无法进行语法纠正,建议删除或重新表达。
× I think I wouldn't take certain methods to make sure I won't forget those important things 'cause they're so by torn important, so important that I won't forget.
✓ I think I wouldn't take any methods to make sure I don't forget those important things because they're so important that I won't forget.
情态动词用法错误,'wouldn't'和'won't'不符合语境,应使用一般现在时态表达习惯性行为。
× 'cause they're so by torn important, so important that I won't forget.
✓ 'cause they're so very important, so important that I won't forget.
介词短语'by torn'错误,应为副词'very'来修饰形容词important。