Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response with clear supporting details, using proper sentence structure and linking words. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant information.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, in my job as a cashier, I remember customers' usual orders, which helps me serve them quickly and efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words to improve flow and be more specific about the consequences.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, during my business management studies, I missed the deadline for an assignment because I submitted it a day late, which unfortunately lowered my grade.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words and provide specific examples of what you need to remember.

Exemplo: As both a student and a worker, I need to remember many things daily. For example, I have to keep track of my bus schedule, my sister's class times, and important deadlines like assignments and quizzes.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain clearly how you use these methods.

Exemplo: I remember important things by using sticky notes and a mobile app where I write down tasks. This app sends me notifications on the day, which helps me stay organized and not forget anything.

× I am working as a employee and harvest and my job position is Carnisha.

✓ I am working as an employee and harvester and my job position is Carnisha.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'employee'. Also, 'harvest' should be 'harvester' to correctly describe the job role as a noun.

× So for some time customer went.

✓ So for some time customers went.

The noun 'customer' should be plural 'customers' to agree with the context indicating multiple people.

× So sometime customer have not that much time so they just they're garnishes and stuff in one line.

✓ So sometimes customers do not have that much time so they just put their garnishes and stuff in one line.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Customer' should be plural 'customers'. 'Have' needs auxiliary 'do' for plural present tense. 'They're' is incorrect here; 'put' is needed as the verb. 'Garnishes' is the correct plural noun.

× So I had.

✓ So I had to do that.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb or object. Adding 'to do that' completes the thought.

× I have forgotten something important before.

✓ I have forgotten something important before.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present perfect tense to indicate past experience.

× during my business management and enter preneurship study 'cause I missed the deadline of my assignment in one of my cores.

✓ during my business management and entrepreneurship studies because I missed the deadline for my assignment in one of my courses.

Use 'studies' for plural academic subjects. 'Because' is the correct conjunction instead of informal ''cause'. 'Deadline for' is the correct preposition. 'Cores' should be 'courses'.

× The assignment was due on Saturday but I only submitted intron Sunday which caused my professor to direct my grade.

✓ The assignment was due on Saturday but I only submitted it on Sunday which caused my professor to deduct my grade.

'Intron' is a typo and should be 'on'. 'Deduct' is the correct verb for lowering a grade, not 'direct'.

× As I am a student and worker, so at the same time I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life.

✓ As I am a student and worker, I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life.

Using both 'As' and 'so' together is redundant. Removing 'so' improves sentence flow.

× So I need to remember when to take bus or when is my sister like classes and when I have four days so that all of the important things like my assignments, my quizzes, all of that.

✓ So I need to remember when to take the bus, when my sister has classes, and when I have free days so that I can manage all important things like my assignments and quizzes.

'Take bus' needs the article 'the'. 'When is my sister like classes' is incorrect; it should be 'when my sister has classes'. 'Four days' likely means 'free days'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I'm trying to remember all the important things by various criteria like I like the sticky notes, I have one app in my mobile phone and I just write important things on that and I always have the long set for my important things that on the day I get notification from 1 tip.

✓ I'm trying to remember all the important things by various methods like using sticky notes. I have an app on my mobile phone where I write important things, and I always have a long list of important things so that on the day I get a notification as a reminder.

'By various criteria' is incorrect; 'methods' fits better. 'I like the sticky notes' is awkward; rephrased for clarity. 'On that' should be 'on my phone/app'. 'Long set' should be 'long list'. The sentence is restructured for coherence and grammar.