Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Use simple sentences to express your ideas naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. Although I sometimes forget what the teacher says, I try to remember important information by reviewing my notes regularly.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the situation to make your answer more effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last year I forgot to bring my laptop to a computer class where it was compulsory. As a result, I felt very embarrassed in front of my classmates.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain why these things are important to remember and be specific about your routine.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule, such as when to have lunch and dinner. Because of my busy routine, I sometimes forget these, so it is important for me to keep track of them carefully.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use simple and clear sentences, and explain your methods step by step using linking words to make your answer logical.

Exemplo: I remember important things by keeping notes on my mobile phone. This way, I get notifications for important tasks. Also, when I am at home, I use a timetable to organize my activities.

× Yes, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things because as I'm not talented guy in my college I lose remember what teacher taught us.

✓ Yes, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things because as I'm not a talented guy in my college, I lose remembering what the teacher taught us.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'talented guy' which is singular countable noun, and 'lose remember' is incorrect; it should be 'lose remembering' or better 'forget'. Also, 'teacher' needs 'the' as it refers to a specific teacher. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner.

× Yes, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things because as I'm not talented guy in my college I lose remember what teacher taught us.

✓ Yes, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things because as I'm not a talented guy in my college, I forget what the teacher taught us.

The phrase 'lose remember' is incorrect; the verb 'lose' should not be followed by the base form 'remember'. Instead, 'forget' is the correct verb to express failing to recall something. Alternatively, 'lose remembering' is also incorrect. Use 'forget' to express this meaning.

× Yes, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things because as I'm not talented guy in my college I lose remember what teacher taught us.

✓ Yes, I think I'm pretty good at memorizing things because as I'm not a talented guy in my college, I forget what the teacher taught us.

The noun 'teacher' refers to a specific person known in context, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'teacher' is incorrect in this context.

× So I'll consider the. Myself, AIDS are memorizing person, so yeah, I do memorize a lot of things in my daily life.

✓ So I'll consider myself as a memorizing person, so yeah, I do memorize a lot of things in my daily life.

The original sentence has fragmented and unclear structure. 'AIDS are memorizing person' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'consider myself as a memorizing person'. Proper sentence structure improves clarity.

× Not that much, but last year I forgot to bring my laptop to my like computer class.

✓ Not that much, but last year I forgot to bring my laptop to my computer class.

The phrase 'to my like computer class' is awkward; 'like' is unnecessary here. The past tense 'forgot' is correctly used. Removing 'like' clarifies the sentence.

× We are at that time it is compulsory to bring such laptop but I unfortunately forgot to broad that.

✓ At that time, it was compulsory to bring such a laptop, but I unfortunately forgot to bring it.

'We are at that time' is incorrect; it should be 'At that time'. 'It is' should be past tense 'it was' to match 'last year'. 'Broad' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'bring'. Also, 'such laptop' needs an article 'a'. Subject-verb agreement and verb choice are corrected.

× We are at that time it is compulsory to bring such laptop but I unfortunately forgot to broad that.

✓ At that time, it was compulsory to bring such a laptop, but I unfortunately forgot to bring it.

The noun 'laptop' is singular countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect.

× so I feel so embarrassed in front.

✓ So I felt so embarrassed in front of everyone.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'in front'. Adding 'of everyone' completes the phrase. Also, past tense 'felt' matches the past event.

× Well, I will say in my daily life, I have to remember my daily routine now, what time to have lawns and what time to have dinner because because of my busy schedule I mostly forgot.

✓ Well, I would say in my daily life, I have to remember my daily routine, like what time to have lunch and what time to have dinner because of my busy schedule I mostly forget.

'Will say' is better as 'would say' for politeness. 'Lawns' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'lunch'. 'Mostly forgot' should be present tense 'mostly forget' to match habitual action. Repetition of 'because' is corrected.

× Well, I will say in my daily life, I have to remember my daily routine now, what time to have lawns and what time to have dinner because because of my busy schedule I mostly forgot.

✓ Well, I would say in my daily life, I have to remember my daily routine, like what time to have lunch and what time to have dinner because of my busy schedule I mostly forget.

No definite article is needed before 'lunch' and 'dinner' when speaking generally about meals. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× So it is very crucial for me to follow these things rapidly.

✓ So it is very crucial for me to follow these things regularly.

The adverb 'rapidly' is incorrectly used here; 'regularly' fits better to express frequency. Pronouns are correct.

× Will I remember important things because I always keep not in my mobile so that I get notified whenever I have to do some like really important tasks at that time I use such mobile and when I when I was, when I am in my home at the time, I always you timetable that that is.

✓ I remember important things because I always keep notes on my mobile so that I get notified whenever I have to do some really important tasks. At that time, I use my mobile, and when I am at home, I always use a timetable.

'Will I remember' is incorrect; simple present 'I remember' is appropriate. 'Keep not' should be 'keep notes'. 'You timetable' is incorrect; should be 'use a timetable'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity and correct modal verb usage.