Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and hesitations, which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to form complete sentences, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be careful with pronunciation and sentence structure to improve clarity.

Exemplo: I don't think I'm very good at memorising things because I often forget important tasks. For instance, at work, I sometimes forget what I need to do, which has led to my manager scolding me.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness, making it difficult to understand. Try to organise your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid fragmented sentences and ensure you finish your thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot that it was my father's birthday. As a result, I booked a flight back to Saudi Arabia without realising the special occasion, which upset my father.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. To improve, try to speak in full sentences, avoid pauses, and clearly explain your ideas with supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I need to remember to pray before starting my day because I believe it keeps me safe. For example, I pray to God to guide me throughout the day and help me make good decisions.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. To improve, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to organisation and memory techniques.

Exemplo: I usually put sticky notes on my desktop or in my office to remind myself of important tasks. For example, if I have a meeting, I write a note with the time so I don't forget it.

× I don't believe I am good at memorizing things because I kept on forgetting things that are important.

✓ I don't believe I am good at memorizing things because I keep on forgetting things that are important.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'I kept on forgetting' suggests a past habit, but the context implies a current ongoing issue, so the present tense 'keep on forgetting' is appropriate.

× For example, when I am at work, I kept 2 forget the things I need to do which resulted too. Get. Scolded by manager.

✓ For example, when I am at work, I keep forgetting the things I need to do, which results in me getting scolded by my manager.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'kept' and has fragmented phrases. Since the context is habitual, present tense 'keep forgetting' is correct. Also, 'resulted too. Get. Scolded' is fragmented and should be corrected to 'results in me getting scolded'. The possessive 'my manager' is needed.

× Yes, I forget one time that my father was his birthday that day.

✓ Yes, I forgot one time that it was my father's birthday that day.

The past event requires past tense 'forgot' instead of present 'forget'. Also, 'my father was his birthday' is incorrect; it should be 'it was my father's birthday' to indicate the occasion.

× So what happened is that? I book. A flight going back to Saudi without thinking.

✓ So what happened is that I booked a flight going back to Saudi without thinking.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'I book.' should be 'I booked' to match past tense, and the question mark is unnecessary. The sentence should be combined properly.

× That was his birthday that day, and because of that, my father.

✓ That was his birthday that day, and because of that, my father was upset with me.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or predicate after 'my father'. It needs completion to convey the intended meaning.

× I need to pray before I start my day because I believe praying. Makes me a. Is the safe?

✓ I need to pray before I start my day because I believe praying makes me safe.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical phrases like 'Makes me a. Is the safe?'. It should be a single coherent sentence with correct adjective use: 'makes me safe'.

× For example, before I start my day, I will pray to God that He will guide me throughout the day. And.

✓ For example, before I start my day, I will pray to God that He will guide me throughout the day.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'And.' which is incomplete. Removing 'And.' completes the sentence properly.

× I put sticky notes at my desktop or at my office so that I will not forget the important important things or important task that day.

✓ I put sticky notes on my desktop or in my office so that I will not forget important things or important tasks that day.

The phrase 'important important things' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'important task' should be plural 'important tasks' to match 'things'. Prepositions 'on' for desktop and 'in' for office are more appropriate.

× For example, a. If I have a meeting, I make sure to put a note that I have meeting at this time so that I will not forget this.

✓ For example, if I have a meeting, I make sure to put a note that I have a meeting at this time so that I will not forget it.

The sentence is fragmented with 'a.' and missing articles. 'I have meeting' should be 'I have a meeting'. Also, 'forget this' is better as 'forget it' for clarity.