Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'memorizing thing' er bodole 'memorizing things' bola uchit. Apni answer e kichu redundancy ache, jemon 'I don't remember I I remember them' ektu confusing. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke sohoje, shothik bhabe rakhte, ebong kichu linking words use korte, jate answer ta natural lage.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget important dates like birthdays or anniversaries. Therefore, I usually write these dates in my notepad so that I can remember them easily.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, jemon 'occurred to be' er bodole 'occurred to me' bola uchit. 'giving arranging' phrase ta confused kore. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik structure e rakhte ebong linking words use korte, jate answer ta clear ebong natural lage.

Exemplo: Yes, last year I forgot my anniversary and I only remembered it in the evening, which made me feel terrible. However, I tried to make up for it by arranging a beautiful dinner for my husband the next day.

Sugestão: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu chhoto grammar error ache, jemon 'client' er age 'a' thaka uchit, 'kids schools' er bodole 'kids' school' bola uchit. Apni linking words aro bhalo bhabe use korte paren, jate answer ta aro fluent lage.

Exemplo: As a working mom, I have a lot to remember. For example, at work, I need to keep track of project deadlines and important meetings with a client. Additionally, I attend weekly meetings to catch up with my team. At home, I have to remember my kids' school parent-teacher meetings and doctor's appointments.

Sugestão: Apnar answer e kichu sentence incomplete ebong confusing. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik structure e rakhte ebong linking words use korte. Apni jodi kichu specific example dite paren, tahole answer aro bhalo hobe.

Exemplo: Since I am forgetful, I try to remember important things by writing them down. Usually, I use my phone to note them, especially when I am at work or in meetings. Sometimes, I also write in my notebook to keep track of tasks.

× I'm actually not very good at memorizing thing.

✓ I'm actually not very good at memorizing things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items or facts to memorize, not just one.

× I often don't remember important days such as birthdays or anniversary's and my friends and family notice that.

✓ I often don't remember important days such as birthdays or anniversaries and my friends and family notice that.

The word 'anniversary's' is incorrectly written with an apostrophe; it should be the plural form 'anniversaries' without an apostrophe.

× So to avoid that I tend to write important dates on my notepad so that I don't remember I I remember them.

✓ So to avoid that, I tend to write important dates on my notepad so that I remember them.

The sentence is confusing and contains repetition 'I don't remember I I remember'. It should be corrected to clearly express the intention to remember important dates by writing them down.

× Yes, just last year I forgot about my anniversary and it only occurred to be at the evening of that day, which made me feel terrible.

✓ Yes, just last year I forgot about my anniversary and it only occurred to me in the evening of that day, which made me feel terrible.

The phrase 'occurred to be' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'occurred to me'. Also, 'at the evening' should be 'in the evening'.

× However, I try to compensate that by giving arranging a beautiful dinner for my husband next day.

✓ However, I try to compensate for that by arranging a beautiful dinner for my husband the next day.

The phrase 'giving arranging' is incorrect; it should be 'compensate for that by arranging'. Also, 'next day' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Actually at work I have to remember my project deadlines, important meetings with client and also some weekly meetings that I need to do to catch up with my team.

✓ Actually at work I have to remember my project deadlines, important meetings with clients and also some weekly meetings that I need to do to catch up with my team.

The word 'client' should be plural 'clients' because it refers to multiple people or companies.

× As a mom I have to remember my my kids schools parent teacher meeting or doctors appointment etc.

✓ As a mom I have to remember my kids' schools' parent-teacher meetings or doctors' appointments etc.

Possessive forms are needed here: 'kids' schools'', 'parent-teacher meetings' (hyphenated), and 'doctors' appointments' to indicate meetings and appointments belonging to schools and doctors. Also, plural forms 'meetings' and 'appointments' are appropriate.

× I really struggled to remember important things and since I'm a bit forgetful so I try to write it down on my notepad.

✓ I really struggle to remember important things and since I'm a bit forgetful, I try to write them down on my notepad.

The sentence has redundancy with 'and' and 'so' together; also, tense consistency requires present tense 'struggle'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to 'things'.

× Usually I write it on my phone and or if I'm at work I in a meeting.

✓ Usually I write it on my phone, or if I'm at work, I write it in a meeting.

The phrase 'and or' is incorrect; it should be 'or'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and missing the verb 'write' in the second clause.

× I tried to write things on my on my notebook, but yeah.

✓ I tried to write things in my notebook, but yeah.

The phrase 'on my on my' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'in my notebook' because we write 'in' a notebook.