Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
I do think I have a good time embracing things because. I always forget those things I have learned just day before. I have two view 1000 times. Of my notes to remember this knowledge.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Aye. I don't think I forgot something important because I've already down on the notes if I need to do something important like those deadlines or appointments. So I don't remember that I forgot something important.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
In my daily life, I really just remember to text. DI lines and appointment or I? Where I put those important files in my computer? SO is about work and study things.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I really just read it out on the notes. On my phone or on the paper? If I make a like list on my phone, I will took a screenshot and set it to be my log screen so I will save them. Every time I.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达不够清晰,语法和用词存在错误,导致意思难以理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免重复和不连贯的句子。
Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. I usually review my notes several times to help me remember important information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和句型,清楚地说明自己的观点。
Exemplo: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always write down deadlines and appointments in my notes to remind myself.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答内容混乱,句子不完整,缺乏连贯性。建议组织好句子结构,明确表达需要记住的具体内容。
Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to send messages, attend appointments, and keep track of important files on my computer related to work and study.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,清楚描述记忆方法,并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。
Exemplo: I usually read my notes on my phone or paper. If I make a list on my phone, I take a screenshot and set it as my lock screen to remind myself of important tasks.
× I do think I have a good time embracing things because.
✓ I do think I have a good time memorising things because.
句子结构不完整,'embracing things'用词不当,应为'memorising things',意思是记忆东西。建议使用正确表达以符合语境。
× I have two view 1000 times.
✓ I have to view my notes 1000 times.
'two view'中'view'应为复数形式'views',但根据语境应为不定式'to view',表示'必须查看'。建议使用正确的动词形式。
× I don't think I forgot something important because I've already down on the notes if I need to do something important like those deadlines or appointments.
✓ I don't think I have forgotten something important because I've already written down notes if I need to do something important like deadlines or appointments.
时态使用错误,'forgot'应使用现在完成时'have forgotten','down on the notes'表达不正确,应为'written down notes'。建议使用正确的时态和表达。
× So I don't remember that I forgot something important.
✓ So I don't remember forgetting something important.
'remember that I forgot'表达不自然,应该用动名词形式'remember forgetting'。建议使用正确的动词形式搭配。
× I really just remember to text. DI lines and appointment or I? Where I put those important files in my computer? SO is about work and study things.
✓ I really just remember to text deadlines and appointments or where I put those important files on my computer. So it's about work and study things.
'DI lines'应为'deadlines','in my computer'应为'on my computer',句子断裂且标点错误。建议使用正确的介词和连贯句子。
× If I make a like list on my phone, I will took a screenshot and set it to be my log screen so I will save them.
✓ If I make a like list on my phone, I will take a screenshot and set it to be my lock screen so I will save them.
'will took'时态错误,应为'will take','log screen'应为'lock screen'。建议注意动词时态和拼写。