Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is direct and clear, which is good. However, to improve, try to add a little more detail or an example to make your response more natural and engaging. Also, avoid repeating the same word; use synonyms like 'remember' or 'retain'.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember important dates and appointments without writing them down.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Use the correct past tense form 'forgot' instead of 'forgotten'. Also, try to structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by specific details, and use linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important documents before. For example, I once forgot to bring my 10th and 11th-grade certificates along with my passport when submitting my application, which caused a delay.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases and focus on concrete examples of what you need to remember daily.

Exemplo: In daily life, I need to remember important tasks like work deadlines and family commitments. For example, remembering to call my parents regularly helps maintain our close relationship.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear but can be improved by correcting minor grammar errors and adding linking words for coherence. Also, try to explain why this method works for you to enrich your response.

Exemplo: I remember important things by making a to-do list every night before going to bed. This method helps me organise my tasks clearly, so I don't forget anything important the next day.

× Yes, I forgotten to take my 10 certificate and 11 certificate and passport for submitting for my application process.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten to take my 10th certificate, 11th certificate, and passport for submitting my application.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and should be used with an auxiliary verb like 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, '10 certificate' and '11 certificate' should be '10th certificate' and '11th certificate' to indicate ordinal numbers. The phrase 'for submitting for my application process' is redundant; 'for submitting my application' is clearer.

× We need to. Remember many things in our daily life, we don't want to forgo our parents, our family members, our siblings.

✓ We need to remember many things in our daily life; we don't want to forget our parents, our family members, and our siblings.

The sentence has an unnecessary period after 'to' which breaks the sentence incorrectly. Also, 'forgo' means to give up voluntarily, but the intended meaning is 'forget'. The sentence should be connected properly with a semicolon or conjunction, and 'forget' should be used instead of 'forgo'.

× That gives us more support and motivated as to reaching a higher skill level.

✓ They give us more support and motivation to reach a higher skill level.

The pronoun 'That' is singular but refers to multiple things mentioned earlier, so 'They' is appropriate. Also, 'motivated' is an adjective, but here a noun 'motivation' fits better. The phrase 'as to reaching' is incorrect; 'to reach' is the correct infinitive form.

× So in that way, we want to remember many things that is essential in our life.

✓ So in that way, we want to remember many things that are essential in our life.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'many things' which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I remember important things by making A to do list.

✓ I remember important things by making a to-do list.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' as it is a compound noun.

× At the night I make A to do list and then go to bed.

✓ At night, I make a to-do list and then go to bed.

The phrase 'At the night' is incorrect; 'At night' is the correct expression without 'the'. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'.