Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，“more easier”应为“easier”。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复和口头语“Uh”，并且回答时尽量简洁明了。

Exemplo: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I use a To-Do List app on my phone which helps me stay organized and remember important tasks.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“Unfortunately our help”不清楚，句子断裂较多。建议练习连贯表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意时态和介词的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting with my advisor during my first year at college. Fortunately, my advisor was very understanding and didn't get angry with me.

Sugestão: 回答中断断续续，缺乏连贯性和完整句子，表达不清晰。建议练习完整句子表达，使用连接词组织语言，并避免口头语“uh”。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to keep track of my assignments and group projects. Also, I have to remember the deadlines for each task. Since I'm a university student, I must remember all the course content as well.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I orally taking note”应为“I take notes orally”，以及时态错误。建议注意动词形式和时态一致，使用完整句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I take notes orally and use an app called Notion to create a To-Do List every day. I check it anytime on my phone or laptop, which helps me stay organized, especially when I have a lot going on.

× To be honest I'm not good at memory things, but with the help of my phone it becomes more easier.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good at memorising things, but with the help of my phone it becomes easier.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作；'more easier'是比较级错误，'easier'已经是比较级，不能加'more'。建议去掉'more'。

× Uh, I used to.

✓ Uh, I used to.

该句不完整，缺少后续内容，建议补充完整句子以表达完整意思。

× I use an app on my phone to create To Do List.

✓ I use an app on my phone to create a To-Do List.

'To Do List'前缺少冠词'a'，且' To Do List'应写作'To-Do List'，表示待办事项列表。

× It helps me be more organized and stay top of everything.

✓ It helps me be more organized and stay on top of everything.

短语'stay top of everything'缺少介词'on'，正确表达是'stay on top of everything'，表示掌控一切。

× Unfortunately our help.

✓ Unfortunately, no one could help me.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和主语，导致句意不明。建议补充完整句子表达意思。

× I have a meeting on Friday with my advisor but I forgot it completely.

✓ I had a meeting on Friday with my advisor but I forgot it completely.

句中描述的是过去发生的事情，'have'应使用过去时'had'以保持时态一致。

× My advisor is super understanding and didn't get angry on me.

✓ My advisor is super understanding and didn't get angry with me.

动词短语'get angry'后应接介词'with'而非'on'，表示对某人生气。

× They might daily life.

✓ In daily life, I need to...

原句语法混乱，缺少主语和谓语，建议重构句子以表达完整意思。

× I need to. Keep track on my. Assignment.

✓ I need to keep track of my assignments.

短语'keep track'后应接介词'of'，表示跟踪某事；'assignment'应为复数形式'assignments'。

× Unlock my group project and uh.

✓ Work on my group project and, uh...

'Unlock'用法不当，且句子不完整。建议改为'work on'表示参与项目。

× OK, make task deadline.

✓ OK, meet task deadlines.

'make task deadline'表达不准确，正确表达应为'meet deadlines'，表示按时完成任务截止日期。

× Since I'm a university student, I need to remember all the content for my courses.

✓ Since I'm a university student, I need to remember all the content for my courses.

该句无明显语法错误，内容表达正确。

× I orally taking note.

✓ I take notes orally.

'I orally taking note'结构错误，动词形式不正确，应使用一般现在时'take'，并将'note'改为复数'notes'。

× Using a app called Notion.

✓ Using an app called Notion.

'app'以元音音素开头，前面冠词应为'an'而非'a'。

× It helps me created To Do List every day.

✓ It helps me create a To-Do List every day.

'helps me created'中'created'错误，应为动词原形'create'，因为help后接动词原形。

× A Check it anytime on my phone or on my laptop.

✓ I check it anytime on my phone or on my laptop.

句首'A'错误，应为主语'I'；'Check'首字母不应大写。

× It helps me stay on top of everything, especially when I have a lot going on.

✓ It helps me stay on top of everything, especially when I have a lot going on.

该句无明显语法错误，表达正确。