Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks coherence. Try to make your sentences complete and connect your ideas logically. Use linking words to explain your example clearly and avoid fragmented sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I played a memorization game with my friend recently, and I performed very well. This shows that I can remember numbers and other details effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide a specific example with proper explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I forgot my friend's birthday recently, but luckily my phone reminder alerted me. Because I often forget, I usually write things down to remember them.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many unclear phrases. Try to organize your thoughts and use simple, clear sentences. Mention specific things you need to remember and how you do it, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and special dates like anniversaries and birthdays. Fortunately, I use my phone's reminder app to help me, and sometimes I write notes to keep track of these events.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has incomplete sentences. Try to explain clearly how you remember important things, using proper grammar and linking words. Give a clear example to support your answer.

Exemplo: I usually remember important things by setting reminders on my phone or writing them down. For example, I keep a chart with special dates like anniversaries in front of me and set phone alerts before these occasions.

× For example, me and my friend.

✓ For example, my friend and I.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the sentence. The correct subject pronoun is 'I'. When referring to oneself and another person as the subject, 'I' should be used after the other person.

× I am doing a game that was.

✓ I played a game.

The phrase 'I am doing a game that was' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The past action should be expressed using the simple past tense 'played' instead of the present continuous 'am doing' and the incomplete clause 'that was'.

× About memorization.

✓ It was about memorization.

The fragment 'About memorization.' lacks a subject and verb, making it an incomplete sentence. Adding 'It was' completes the sentence structure.

× And I did.

✓ And I did very well.

The sentence 'And I did.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'very well' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× so I think I can keep track of numbers and things that shouldn't have been.

✓ so I think I can keep track of numbers and things that I should remember.

The phrase 'things that shouldn't have been' is unclear and incorrect in this context. It should be 'things that I should remember' to convey the intended meaning.

× Honestly, I keep forgetting about important things so I I write it down.

✓ Honestly, I keep forgetting important things, so I write them down.

The phrase 'forgetting about' is less appropriate than 'forgetting' in this context. Also, 'I I' is a repetition error. 'Write it down' should be 'write them down' to refer to plural 'things'.

× I had and body of my friend that other day but I forgot it.

✓ I had a birthday of my friend the other day, but I forgot it.

The phrase 'had and body' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'had a birthday'. Also, 'that other day' should be 'the other day' for correct expression of time.

× My phone reminder reminded me of that so I keep forgetting things.

✓ My phone reminder reminded me of that, so I don't keep forgetting things.

The original sentence contradicts itself. If the phone reminded, then the speaker does not keep forgetting. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I think I need to remember what the tax I'm going to first form in the throughout the day that's eat an sometimes the spatial location like anniversary, birthday or luckily my phone has a reminder I sent on reminder.

✓ I think I need to remember the tasks I'm going to do throughout the day, such as eating and sometimes special dates like anniversaries or birthdays. Luckily, my phone has a reminder that I set.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect pronouns, unclear phrases ('tax' instead of 'tasks', 'first form', 'that's eat an'), and run-on structure. The correction clarifies and corrects these issues.

× For the spatial location an otherwise I write it down.

✓ For the special occasions, otherwise I write them down.

'Spatial location' is incorrect; likely meant 'special occasions'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. The phrase is corrected for meaning and grammar.

× I think I do it by reminder of the phone or write it down.

✓ I think I do it by using the phone's reminder or by writing it down.

The phrase 'by reminder of the phone' is incorrect. It should be 'by using the phone's reminder'. Also, parallel structure is improved by adding 'by' before 'writing it down'.

× Example I write down the anniversary's or bodies of my special arms in a chart in my in front of my ***** I put into in front of my days and put reminder at least only be for the special occasion or.

✓ For example, I write down the anniversaries or birthdays of my special ones on a chart in front of me. I put reminders at least before the special occasions.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'anniversary's' should be 'anniversaries' (plural), 'bodies' likely means 'birthdays', 'special arms' is unclear and corrected to 'special ones', and the sentence structure is fragmented. The correction clarifies and corrects these issues.