Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều câu không hoàn chỉnh và ý không được trình bày rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I study for exams, I try to use mind maps, but they don't help me much. This makes me feel stressed, especially when learning a new language that requires remembering many words.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý, đồng thời dùng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to bring my study materials for an exam, which made me feel very stressed. I usually rely on mind maps, but they don't always work well for me.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách liệt kê thêm những việc cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my keys when I go out. Besides that, I also have to remember my phone, wallet, and any tasks I need to complete during the day.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, sắp xếp ý hợp lý và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I remember important things by writing them down in a notebook or using digital apps on my iPad. These tools help me stay organized because I can set reminders for appointments and tasks, so I don't forget them.

× Well absolutely not. I am not quite good at memorizing things because when studying for exams.

✓ Well, absolutely not. I am not very good at memorizing things when studying for exams.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection between clauses. Adding a comma after 'Well' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Usually it's technically correct presentations on my maps, but it doesn't help me a lot.

✓ Usually, the presentations on my maps are technically correct, but they don't help me much.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and unclear subject-verb agreement. Reordering the sentence and clarifying the subject improves readability and correctness.

× So this ability. Just make me feel more stressful and learning new language are preparing populations. It isn't.

✓ So this ability just makes me feel more stressed, and learning a new language is preparing me for challenges. It isn't easy.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear phrases. Combining sentences and correcting verb forms clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× What I have forgotten a lot of things important because there are some informations are important and like study app studying and prepare for exams.

✓ I have forgotten many important things because some information is important, like studying and preparing for exams.

'Informations' is uncountable and should be 'information'. 'A lot of things important' is awkward; 'many important things' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I trust is my math but they don't help me whenever 2 tails effectively.

✓ I trust my maps, but they don't help me study effectively.

The original sentence has unclear wording and subject-verb agreement issues. 'Math' likely meant 'maps'. 'Whenever 2 tails' is unclear and corrected to 'study effectively' for meaning.

× I think that my maps doesn't work on me and it makes me feel stress especially when learning new language as I need to remember a lot of.

✓ I think that my maps don't work for me, and they make me feel stressed, especially when learning a new language as I need to remember a lot.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'maps' is plural, so 'doesn't' should be 'don't'. 'Feel stress' should be 'feel stressed'. Added missing words for completeness.

× Well I need really to remember that if I go out I need to bring keys and also the I need to remember what I really need to do when I got out so.

✓ Well, I really need to remember that if I go out, I need to bring my keys, and also remember what I need to do when I go out.

The sentence is awkward and contains redundancy and errors like 'the I need'. Correcting word order and removing redundancy improves clarity.

× What are you should remember important things by writing them down on the independent or are using digital apps on my iPad.

✓ You should remember important things by writing them down on paper or by using digital apps on my iPad.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrases like 'on the independent'. Correcting to 'on paper' and proper sentence structure improves clarity.

× Well, it helps me stay organized. My task can set reminders so I don't forget it. Lisa appointments.

✓ Well, it helps me stay organized. My tasks can set reminders so I don't forget appointments.

'My task can set reminders' is incorrect; it should be 'My tasks can set reminders'. 'Lisa appointments' is unclear and corrected to 'appointments'. Sentence structure improved.