Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で明確な文を作り、文法の基本を守ることが重要です。例えば、主語と動詞を正しく使い、理由を述べる際は接続詞を使いましょう。

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I usually try to understand the material instead of just memorising it.

Sugestão: 文が断片的で意味がつかみにくいです。質問に直接答えた後、具体的な状況や結果をつなげて説明しましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習が必要です。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Last week, I forgot to go to my part-time job, and my supervisor was very angry with me. However, I apologized sincerely, and he understood.

Sugestão: 回答が断片的で意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な内容を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、日常生活で覚えておくべきことを明確に述べ、理由を付け加えます。

Exemplo: I need to remember my daily schedule, so I use a calendar to keep track of my appointments and important events.

Sugestão: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。重要なことを覚える方法を明確に述べ、理由や効果を説明する文を作る練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: I always make a schedule to remember important things because it helps me stay organized and not forget any tasks.

× I'm not good at memorizing things. Becaused. I have not. Right. Studying since I was there. Turn so I'm I don't use the memorizing something.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things because I haven't been studying since I was there, so I don't use memorization.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Last week I. I forgot. Sept Part time job. My supervisor. Was very angry with me. But. I apologize deeply to him. So it is very.

✓ Last week, I forgot my part-time job. My supervisor was very angry with me, but I apologized deeply to him.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain tense inconsistencies. Using past tense verbs correctly and combining fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I need to remember. In my day, we arrive. It is. Calendar. Which I. Aye. Alright, my schedule it is very important and it remind to me.

✓ I need to remember my daily schedule. I use a calendar, which is very important and reminds me of my appointments.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has unclear phrasing. Correcting prepositions and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and improves grammatical correctness.

× I always. I always make a schedule to remember important things. If I. If I make a car in that. I've. I can. Remember something?

✓ I always make a schedule to remember important things. If I make a card for that, I can remember something.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining fragments into complete sentences and correcting vocabulary ('car' to 'card') improves clarity and grammatical correctness.