Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice, like 'I usually forget things' and 'I am an absent minded person'.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget easily. Therefore, I usually keep notes and make To-Do lists to help me remember important tasks.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to explain the situation and your feelings. Also, avoid repeating words like 'I forgot I forgot'.

Exemplo: Yes, recently I went to a fair and forgot my mobile phone there. This incident caused me a lot of stress, and I felt very guilty for being careless.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then add specific examples using linking words. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember the tasks I have to complete on time. Additionally, since I tend to be forgetful, I often forget where I place things or the calls I need to attend.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but is a bit disorganised and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, try to be concise and avoid unnecessary details that do not add clarity.

Exemplo: I usually write down important things and make To-Do lists, which help me complete tasks on time. For example, recently I had an important meeting, so I noted it down and pasted the reminder in my notebook.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I am an absent minded person and I usually forget things so I often keep my notes with me just to remember things and make To Do List.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I am an absent-minded person and I usually forget things, so I often keep my notes with me just to remember things and make a To-Do List.

The adjective 'absent minded' should be hyphenated as 'absent-minded' when used before a noun. Also, 'To Do List' should be 'To-Do List' with hyphens and preceded by an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, recently I have been to a fair and I forgot I forgot my mobile phone there and that incident really felt to me with this so much stress and I really feel guilty for a.

✓ Yes, recently I went to a fair and I forgot my mobile phone there, and that incident caused me so much stress and I really feel guilty about it.

The phrase 'have been to a fair' is correct but 'I forgot I forgot' is a repetition error; it should be 'I forgot'. Also, 'felt to me with this so much stress' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'caused me so much stress'. 'Feel guilty for a' is incomplete and should be 'feel guilty about it'.

× In my daily life I use I am in need to remember the daily task which I have to complete within the time. Moreover, I am quite tend to be a forgetful person so I mostly forget the things where I have placed and about my routine and the calls I have to attend I for.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the daily tasks which I have to complete on time. Moreover, I tend to be a forgetful person, so I mostly forget where I have placed things, my routine, and the calls I have to attend to.

The phrase 'I use I am in need to remember' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'I need to remember'. 'Daily task' should be plural 'daily tasks'. 'I am quite tend' is incorrect; it should be 'I tend'. The phrase 'forget the things where I have placed' should be 'forget where I have placed things'. The ending 'calls I have to attend I for' is incomplete and should be 'calls I have to attend to'.

× Things I mostly prefer to write down and make notes of important things and to make To Do List to which really helps me to complete my task within time. Moreover, her I would like to talk about an incident that recently on one day there was an important meeting, so I made a note of it and paste it on my booklet so.

✓ I mostly prefer to write down and make notes of important things and to make a To-Do List, which really helps me complete my tasks on time. Moreover, I would like to talk about an incident that happened recently. One day, there was an important meeting, so I made a note of it and pasted it on my booklet.

The sentence structure is awkward and contains pronoun errors. 'Things I mostly prefer' should be 'I mostly prefer'. 'To Do List' should be 'To-Do List' with an article 'a'. 'To which really helps me' should be 'which really helps me'. 'Her I would like' is incorrect; it should be 'I would like'. 'Recently on one day' is better as 'happened recently. One day'. 'Paste it' should be past tense 'pasted it' to match the past event.