Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子，并避免重复表达。

Exemplo: Actually, I am not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget my ID card when I go out.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议使用正确的时态和句型，增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I usually forget my ID card, which causes me problems when buying tickets or using transportation.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱，语法和词汇使用不当。建议明确主题句，合理组织句子，并使用恰当词汇表达观点。

Exemplo: As a student, I need to remember my lesson schedules because I have many classes. Also, remembering important personal information, like my father's name, is essential in daily life.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的动词形式，避免重复，并使句子更简洁自然。

Exemplo: Personally, I prefer to buy a notebook to write down my plans. For example, at the start of the day, I write my plans on paper to help me remember.

× Actually, no my memorized is not very good for examples when I go out I often forget my ID card

✓ Actually, no, my memory is not very good. For example, when I go out, I often forget my ID card.

这里'memorized'是过去分词，错误地用作名词。应使用'memory'表示记忆力。并且句子缺少逗号和连接词，需分句表达。

× Actually, no my memorized is not very good for examples when I go out I often forget my ID card

✓ Actually, no, my memory is not very good. For example, when I go out, I often forget my ID card.

'for examples'应为'for example'，表示举例。

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important for examples when I plan it out.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, when I plan things out.

'have ever forgotten'用法不当，正确表达为'have forgotten'。

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important for examples when I plan it out.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, when I plan things out.

'for examples'应为'for example'。

× It's bring me a lot of travels in buy tickets and use the transportation.

✓ It brings me a lot of trouble when buying tickets and using transportation.

'It's bring'应为'It brings'，动词形式错误。'in buy tickets and use the transportation'结构不正确，应改为'when buying tickets and using transportation'。

× It's bring me a lot of travels in buy tickets and use the transportation.

✓ It brings me a lot of trouble when buying tickets and using transportation.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'。

× It's bring me a lot of travels in buy tickets and use the transportation.

✓ It brings me a lot of trouble when buying tickets and using transportation.

'travels'用法不当，应使用'trouble'表示麻烦。

× In my opinions as a students, I need to remember some lesson schedules you know I have a lot of classes need to remember so I think dad's name is important to remember in my daily life

✓ In my opinion, as a student, I need to remember some lesson schedules. You know, I have a lot of classes to remember, so I think my dad's name is important to remember in my daily life.

'opinions'应为单数'opinion'，'students'应为单数'student'。句子过长，需分句。

× In my opinions as a students, I need to remember some lesson schedules you know I have a lot of classes need to remember so I think dad's name is important to remember in my daily life

✓ In my opinion, as a student, I need to remember some lesson schedules. You know, I have a lot of classes to remember, so I think my dad's name is important to remember in my daily life.

'dad's name'前应加物主代词'my'，表示'我爸爸的名字'。

× Personally, I prefer buy a more notebook to write down my plans on paper for examples when the day start I often write down my plans on paper to remember

✓ Personally, I prefer to buy a notebook to write down my plans on paper. For example, when the day starts, I often write down my plans to remember them.

'prefer'后应接不定式'to buy'，'a more notebook'表达错误，应为'a notebook'。'for examples'应为'for example'。'the day start'应为'the day starts'。

× Personally, I prefer buy a more notebook to write down my plans on paper for examples when the day start I often write down my plans on paper to remember

✓ Personally, I prefer to buy a notebook to write down my plans on paper. For example, when the day starts, I often write down my plans to remember them.

'the day'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'。