Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things nowadays. However, when I was a university student, I used to memorize many concepts for exams. Now, I find it difficult to focus, so I often forget important dates like birthdays or special events.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Provide a direct answer first, then explain with specific examples using linking words. Keep sentences simple and coherent to improve clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, I sometimes miss assignment deadlines or forget to pay my house and electricity bills. But now, I am trying to improve by keeping reminders.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add specific details with linking words. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks like appointments and bill payments. To help with this, I often repeat these tasks in my mind and write them down to avoid forgetting.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain your method with specific examples using linking words. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

Exemplo: I remember important things by writing notes in my diary. For example, I note down when to pay my rent and electricity bills to avoid missing the deadlines, which could cause problems later.

× Honestly I'm not much good at memorizing thing but when I was a graduation student I used to memorize so much your concept to in a lot of market but now it is I am not much focusing on anything.

✓ Honestly, I'm not very good at memorizing things, but when I was a graduate student, I used to memorize many concepts in a lot of markets. Now, I am not focusing much on anything.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. 'Graduation student' is incorrect; the correct term is 'graduate student'. 'So much your concept to in a lot of market' is unclear and corrected to 'many concepts in a lot of markets' to make sense and agree in number.

× Honestly I'm not much good at memorizing thing but when I was a graduation student I used to memorize so much your concept to in a lot of market but now it is I am not much focusing on anything.

✓ Honestly, I'm not very good at memorizing things, but when I was a graduate student, I used to memorize many concepts in a lot of markets. Now, I am not focusing much on anything.

The phrase 'memorize so much your concept to in a lot of market' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It was corrected to 'memorize many concepts in a lot of markets' to use the correct prepositions and plural forms.

× Honestly I'm not much good at memorizing thing but when I was a graduation student I used to memorize so much your concept to in a lot of market but now it is I am not much focusing on anything.

✓ Honestly, I'm not very good at memorizing things, but when I was a graduate student, I used to memorize many concepts in a lot of markets. Now, I am not focusing much on anything.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrectly used here; it should be omitted or replaced with a more appropriate pronoun depending on context. In this case, it was removed to improve clarity.

× That's why I think I'm not good at memorizing the things.

✓ That's why I think I'm not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'the things' is incorrect here; 'things' without 'the' is more natural and grammatically correct when speaking generally.

× Even I can't remember the birth date and the special event date or.

✓ Even I can't remember the birth date or the date of special events.

The phrase 'or' at the end is incomplete and unclear. It was corrected to 'or the date of special events' to complete the thought and use pronouns correctly.

× Yes, I do have a habit of forgetting the important thing, but now I realized the drawback of mine and and I am trying to focusing on memorizing the important thing about how we should I how to submit them submit my assignment on which date I have it to pay my house bill and the electric bill or like that and are still I'm now I am.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of forgetting important things, but now I realize my drawback and I am trying to focus on memorizing important things, like how and when to submit my assignments, and the dates to pay my house and electricity bills.

The modal verb 'do have' is acceptable but redundant here; simplified to 'have'. 'Trying to focusing' is incorrect; it should be 'trying to focus' because 'to' is followed by the base verb. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do have a habit of forgetting the important thing, but now I realized the drawback of mine and and I am trying to focusing on memorizing the important thing about how we should I how to submit them submit my assignment on which date I have it to pay my house bill and the electric bill or like that and are still I'm now I am.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of forgetting important things, but now I realize my drawback and I am trying to focus on memorizing important things, like how and when to submit my assignments, and the dates to pay my house and electricity bills.

The verb 'realized' should be in present tense 'realize' to match the present context. Also, 'have it to pay' is incorrect; corrected to 'the dates to pay' for clarity.

× Yes, I do have a habit of forgetting the important thing, but now I realized the drawback of mine and and I am trying to focusing on memorizing the important thing about how we should I how to submit them submit my assignment on which date I have it to pay my house bill and the electric bill or like that and are still I'm now I am.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of forgetting important things, but now I realize my drawback and I am trying to focus on memorizing important things, like how and when to submit my assignments, and the dates to pay my house and electricity bills.

The phrase 'the important thing' should be plural 'important things' because it refers to multiple items.

× Yes, I do have a habit of forgetting the important thing, but now I realized the drawback of mine and and I am trying to focusing on memorizing the important thing about how we should I how to submit them submit my assignment on which date I have it to pay my house bill and the electric bill or like that and are still I'm now I am.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of forgetting important things, but now I realize my drawback and I am trying to focus on memorizing important things, like how and when to submit my assignments, and the dates to pay my house and electricity bills.

The phrase 'trying to focusing' is incorrect; after 'trying to' the base verb 'focus' should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× I want to do some so much important things in my daily life.

✓ I want to do many important things in my daily life.

The phrase 'some so much important things' is incorrect; 'many important things' is the correct plural quantifier and adjective order.

× That's why I'm memorizing. I am I'm that memorizing that I think every time in my mind I do to make me remember that thing and I have a habit to for Lois my memory about some important thing.

✓ That's why I'm memorizing. I keep thinking about it in my mind to help me remember things, and I have a habit of forgetting some important things.

The phrase 'I am I'm that memorizing that I think every time in my mind I do to make me remember that thing' is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and structure. It was corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use. 'For Lois' is likely a mishearing of 'forgetting' and corrected accordingly.

× That's why I'm memorizing. I am I'm that memorizing that I think every time in my mind I do to make me remember that thing and I have a habit to for Lois my memory about some important thing.

✓ That's why I'm memorizing. I keep thinking about it in my mind to help me remember things, and I have a habit of forgetting some important things.

The phrase 'some important thing' should be plural 'some important things' because it refers to multiple items.

× I can realize my drawback. I know my drag by that. That's why I'm putting.

✓ I can realize my drawback. I know my weakness because of that. That's why I'm trying to improve.

The phrase 'I know my drag by that' is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and words. It was corrected to 'I know my weakness because of that' for clarity and correct pronoun use. 'I'm putting' is incomplete and corrected to 'I'm trying to improve'.

× Sometimes I'm writing the notes on my diary for remembering the important that that I have to do very prominently that such as the paying the rental bill electricity bill.

✓ Sometimes I write notes in my diary to remember important things that I have to do, such as paying the rental and electricity bills.

The phrase 'writing the notes on my diary for remembering' is incorrect; 'write notes in my diary to remember' is correct. 'The paying the rental bill electricity bill' is incorrect; corrected to 'paying the rental and electricity bills'.

× Sometimes I'm writing the notes on my diary for remembering the important that that I have to do very prominently that such as the paying the rental bill electricity bill.

✓ Sometimes I write notes in my diary to remember important things that I have to do, such as paying the rental and electricity bills.

The phrase 'the important that that I have to do' is incorrect; it should be 'important things that I have to do' to use the correct pronouns and plural form.

× Fear not paying the bill. We will have to do so much of afford to do the next step That's 5 for such important thing.

✓ If we do not pay the bill, we will have to make a lot of effort to take the next step. That's why it's important to remember such things.

The phrase 'Fear not paying the bill' is incorrect; it should be 'If we do not pay the bill'. 'So much of afford' is incorrect; corrected to 'make a lot of effort'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct conjunction use.