Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语言不够连贯，句子结构较为零散，且有重复和停顿。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断断续续，提升表达的流畅性和自然度。可以尝试用一两句简洁明了的句子直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富内容。

Exemplo: It depends on the type of information. I am good at memorising important things related to my schoolwork because I focus more on them. However, for less important things, I might not remember them well.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习完整表达一个事件，注意时态和句子结构，避免中断。可以用简单句子描述事件经过和感受，使回答更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, about a week ago, I forgot to hand in an assignment for one of my subjects. Our class monitor reminded me to submit it that day, and I felt really anxious because I almost missed the deadline.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子断断续续。建议练习用完整句子表达具体内容，注意介词和动词的正确使用，提升表达的准确性和连贯性。

Exemplo: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as the content of my schoolwork, the deadlines for submitting assignments, and who I should submit them to.

Sugestão: 回答表达较为零散，有语法和词汇错误，如“mobile fun mammal”应为“mobile phone”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: I usually write important things down. Sometimes I use my mobile phone to make notes, and other times I write on paper or sticky notes, which helps me remember more conveniently.

× Well, it depends on what thing it is, if it's something to do with school work.

✓ Well, it depends on what things they are, if they're something to do with school work.

这里的thing应该用复数形式things，因为后文指的是多种事情。主语和代词也要对应复数形式。

× Or. Those kind of things, that is really important.

✓ Or those kinds of things, that are really important.

those kind of应改为those kinds of，kind应为复数形式kinds；that指代复数things，谓语动词应为are。

× I think I'm good at memorizing them.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing them.

此句无语法错误，保持不变。

× But it is something. That is not that important.

✓ But it is something that is not that important.

此句无复数错误，保持不变。

× Yes, about one week before.

✓ Yes, about one week ago.

时间状语“before”通常用于比较句中，表示“之前”；单独表示过去时间应使用“ago”。

× I forgot to hand in. An ASSE. Of one of my subjects.

✓ I forgot to hand in an assignment for one of my subjects.

句子断裂且单词“ASSE”不完整，应合并为完整句子并使用正确单词assignment。

× At that time. Our monitor come to me and ask me to hit in today.

✓ At that time, our monitor came to me and asked me to hand it in today.

描述过去事件，动词应使用过去式；“come”改为“came”，“ask”改为“asked”；“hit in”应为“hand it in”。

× And I was really anxious because I.

✓ And I was really anxious because I forgot.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，补充完整表达。

× I need to remember a lot of things.

✓ I need to remember a lot of things.

此句无复数错误，保持不变。

× For example. What is the content of my school work and? What time should I hand in it and who should I hit into?

✓ For example, what is the content of my school work, what time should I hand it in, and who should I hand it to?

句子断裂且结构混乱，合并为完整句子，调整词序和介词使用。

× Sometimes I will write it in my. Mobile fun mammal and sometimes I just write it down on papers and also I will.

✓ Sometimes I will write it in my mobile phone memo, and sometimes I just write it down on paper, and also I will

“mobile fun mammal”应为“mobile phone memo”；“on papers”应为“on paper”，纸张不可数。

× Write my plan. On a sticky notes. Which will reminds me more conveniently.

✓ write my plan on sticky notes, which will remind me more conveniently.

句子断裂，合并为完整句子；“sticky notes”复数，前面不加冠词；“reminds”主语为复数，动词用复数形式“remind”。