Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and ensure coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I practice meditation regularly, which helps improve my memory. Additionally, I can easily recall many important incidents from my life.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to narrate the event logically. Be specific about the situation and outcome.

Exemplo: Yes, last year when I was going to Shimla, I forgot my wallet in the hotel room. Fortunately, when I returned to the hotel, I was able to find it easily with the help of the staff.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas smoothly. Be specific about what you remember and why.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my plans and goals for the day. Additionally, I keep track of meetings and other important events with people to stay organised.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy for better clarity.

Exemplo: I remember important things mainly by using technology. For instance, I set reminders on my phone. Besides that, I have a good memory, so I don't need to put much effort into remembering important tasks.

× I was very good at memorizing things because as I do meditation for their things and even I also we will remember many of my life incidents.

✓ I was very good at memorizing things because I meditate on them and I also remember many incidents from my life.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'do meditation for their things' which is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The verb 'do' should be replaced with 'meditate' to correctly express the action. Also, 'we will remember' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I also remember' to maintain subject consistency and tense.

× How well his when I was last year when I was going to Shimla and I forgot my wallet in a hotel room.

✓ Last year, when I was going to Shimla, I forgot my wallet in a hotel room.

The phrase 'How well his when I was last year' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be simplified to 'Last year, when I was going to Shimla' to correctly express the time and action in past tense.

× And then after that I was still again in that hotel, but with the good grace, I easily find my wallet, Found my wallet.

✓ And then after that, I was still at that hotel, but with good grace, I easily found my wallet.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'I easily find' should be 'I easily found' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'was still again in that hotel' is awkward; 'was still at that hotel' is more appropriate.

× Basically an my daily life I usually remember my plans and goals that I want to achieve in that particular day as well as I also remind that my meetings and some other important events with other individuals.

✓ Basically, in my daily life, I usually remember my plans and goals that I want to achieve on that particular day, and I also remind myself of my meetings and some other important events with other individuals.

The original sentence has incorrect or missing prepositions such as 'an my daily life' which should be 'in my daily life', and 'remind that my meetings' which should be 'remind myself of my meetings'. Proper prepositions are necessary for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× With the help of technology, we can easily now we can easily remember many of these things.

✓ With the help of technology, we can now easily remember many of these things.

The original sentence repeats 'we can easily' unnecessarily, causing redundancy. Also, the placement of 'now' is awkward. Correcting the pronoun usage and word order improves clarity.

× so it is no DMCA so much effort me to remember important things.

✓ so it does not take much effort for me to remember important things.

The phrase 'no DMCA so much effort me' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'does not take much effort for me' to correctly express the idea that remembering important things is not difficult. Proper quantifiers and sentence structure are needed here.