Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several hesitations and repetitions which affect the natural flow. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by concise supporting details without repeating words. Also, avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases to make your answer more effective.

Exemplo: I wasn't good at memorising things as a child, but during high school, especially in medical studies, I had to work hard to improve. Now, I consider myself quite good at memorising important information.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but is affected by hesitations and some grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with verb forms and avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things, especially at work or my coaching institute. For example, I once lost my air router, a costly dental instrument, which I deeply regretted.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit repetitive and unclear in places. Try to give a direct response first, then add a specific example using linking words like 'for example' or 'once'. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct for better clarity.

Exemplo: I need to remember to keep my phone with me every day. For example, once I left my phone charging in a shop at the mall and had to return to get it.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by hesitations and some unclear phrasing. Try to give a clear topic sentence, then explain your method with linking words. Also, avoid repeating words and ensure grammatical accuracy to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: I usually make a list of important tasks in my phone's notepad app because I always carry my phone. I avoid using paper notes since I tend to lose them easily.

× When I was a child, I was not really good at memorizing things, but then later on as I got into them, as I as I as it shows medical in my high school, I really have to work hard to memorize things becauses it's all about learning and grasping things.

✓ When I was a child, I was not really good at memorizing things, but then later on as I got into them, as I showed medical in my high school, I really had to work hard to memorize things because it's all about learning and grasping things.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'have to' and 'shows' when referring to past events. Since the context is about past experiences, verbs should be in past tense: 'had to' and 'showed'. Also, 'becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. This correction aligns the verb tenses with the past time frame.

× I often losing very important things at my job, at my workplace or even at my coaching institute.

✓ I often lose very important things at my job, at my workplace or even at my coaching institute.

The phrase 'I often losing' is grammatically incorrect because 'losing' is a present participle and cannot follow 'I often' without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I often lose' to express habitual action in the present tense.

× One thing which I lost was my air router, that is my dental instrument, which was very costly and I regret losing it.

✓ One thing which I lost was my air router, which is my dental instrument, which was very costly and I regret losing it.

The phrase 'that is my dental instrument' is better replaced with 'which is my dental instrument' to correctly refer to the singular noun 'air router'. This is a minor correction to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes I fall sometimes in my day-to-day life I forgot my phone when it's put on charging point somewhere.

✓ Sometimes I forget in my day-to-day life that I have put my phone on a charging point somewhere.

The sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. 'I fall sometimes' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is forgetting, so 'I forget' is appropriate. Also, 'I forgot' should be 'I forget' to indicate habitual action. 'It's put' should be 'I have put' to correctly express the action of placing the phone. The correction aligns the sentence with present habitual tense and proper verb forms.

× One time I was in a mall and I had to charge my phone and I just left it in and left it in the in the shop and then I had to go back to take my phone.

✓ One time I was in a mall and I had to charge my phone and I just left it in the shop and then I had to go back to take my phone.

The phrase 'left it in and left it in the in the shop' contains repetition and incorrect preposition usage. The correct phrase is 'left it in the shop'. Removing the repeated words and correcting the preposition improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So yes I. Have to remember it in my daily life that I have my phone with me.

✓ So yes, I have to remember in my daily life that I have my phone with me.

The phrase 'remember it in my daily life' is awkward; 'remember in my daily life' is more natural. Also, the period after 'I' is incorrect and should be a comma or removed. This correction improves sentence flow and preposition use.

× I tried to, I tried to make down a list of all the important things which I have to do in my daily life.

✓ I tried to make a list of all the important things which I have to do in my daily life.

The phrase 'make down a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. Also, the repetition 'I tried to, I tried to' is redundant and should be removed. This correction fixes the incorrect phrase and removes redundancy.

× I usually put, I really, I usually put it in my notepad because I am always carrying my phone with me.

✓ I usually put it in my notepad because I am always carrying my phone with me.

The phrase 'I usually put, I really, I usually put it' is repetitive and contains unnecessary pronouns. Removing the extra phrases clarifies the sentence and improves grammatical correctness.

× I'd prefer not to write it on a paper because I am very careless and I know that I will. I might so that paper here and there and it would be really difficult for me to remember it.

✓ I'd prefer not to write it on paper because I am very careless and I know that I might lose that paper here and there and it would be really difficult for me to remember it.

The phrase 'I will. I might so that paper' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I might lose that paper'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. This correction clarifies the meaning and fixes pronoun and article usage.