Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar errors, such as verb tenses and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, I work as a cashier seven days a week, and I often remember customers' names and their orders, which helps me feel confident about my memory.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, when I was moving abroad, I forgot to bring my passport documents, which caused a lot of stress and difficulties.

Sugestão: Your answer is meaningful but lacks clarity and contains some errors. Use complete sentences and correct word choices. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I try to remember to be kind and generous to others because I believe kindness is the key to success and good relationships.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat disorganized and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve sentence flow. Be concise and clear in explaining your methods.

Exemplo: Although I have a good memory, for very important events, I use my smartphone to set reminders or mark dates on the calendar to ensure I don't forget them.

× So I I give you an example like I usually working like 7 days an I manage like I am a cashier.

✓ So I will give you an example. I usually work 7 days a week and I manage because I am a cashier.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'working' instead of the base verb 'work' after 'usually'. The verb after 'usually' should be in the base form to indicate habitual action. Also, 'I give' should be in future tense 'I will give' to fit the context of giving an example.

× I usually working like 7 days an I manage like I am a cashier.

✓ I usually work 7 days a week and I manage because I am a cashier.

The phrase 'like 7 days' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'a week' to indicate frequency. Also, 'like' is misused; 'because' better explains the reason.

× I usually working like 7 days an I manage like I am a cashier.

✓ I usually work 7 days a week and I manage because I am a cashier.

The conjunction 'an' is incorrect; it should be 'and' to connect clauses properly. Also, 'like' is misused; 'because' is appropriate to show cause.

× I have to interact with the people an most of the time I am very good at remembering their names and their orders which makes me feel like I have a good memory.

✓ I have to interact with people and most of the time I am very good at remembering their names and their orders, which makes me feel like I have a good memory.

The article 'the' before 'people' is unnecessary here because it refers to people in general. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses.

× It was very, very difficult thing for me and there was a nightmare for me because a once time when I had to move to abroad, I went to apply my passport, but unfortunately I lost.

✓ It was a very, very difficult thing for me and a nightmare because once when I had to move abroad, I went to apply for my passport, but unfortunately I lost it.

The phrase 'a once time' is incorrect; 'once' alone suffices. 'Move to abroad' should be 'move abroad' without 'to'. 'Apply my passport' should be 'apply for my passport'. Also, 'I lost' is incomplete; it should be 'I lost it' to specify the object.

× Sorry. I just like forget my document which is which was like very important for the. For the meal.

✓ Sorry. I just forgot my document, which was very important for the move.

The phrase 'I just like forget' is incorrect; the past tense 'forgot' is needed. 'Which is which was like' is redundant; only 'which was' is correct. 'For the meal' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'for the move' fits contextually.

× Well, in my daily life, I just want to remember that beat kind.

✓ Well, in my daily life, I just want to remember to be kind.

'That beat kind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to be kind' to express intention.

× Be generous to people, never disrespect anybody because the kindness is a key to success according to me an well.

✓ Be generous to people, never disrespect anybody because kindness is the key to success according to me as well.

The conjunction 'an' is incorrect; it should be 'and' or 'as well'. Also, 'the kindness' should be 'kindness' without 'the' because it is an abstract noun here.

× As I already mentioned that I have a good memory but sometime which the events which is very important for me, I just mark them or like.

✓ As I already mentioned, I have a good memory, but sometimes for events which are very important to me, I just mark them or like.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Which the events which is' is incorrect; it should be 'events which are' to agree in number.

× We have cell phones now an you know that the technology is very, very advanced in these in our days.

✓ We have cell phones now and you know that technology is very, very advanced these days.

The phrase 'in these in our days' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'these days'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'.

× So basically I just put a note on the calendar like on the phone that there is something important thing happening On this date for exam.

✓ So basically, I just put a note on the calendar, like on the phone, that there is something important happening on this date, for example.

'Something important thing' is redundant; 'something important' suffices. 'For exam' should be 'for example' to clarify the meaning. Also, commas improve sentence clarity.