Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is honest but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and try to use a wider range of vocabulary. For example, instead of saying "it takes long hours to memorize," you could say "I find it challenging to retain information quickly." Also, try to keep your answer within 3-4 sentences for clarity.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorizing things because it usually takes me a long time to remember information. I often need to review material several times before it sticks.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "questions and answers valuating." Instead, give specific examples and explain briefly. Keep your sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, recently I forgot to wash the dishes, which made my mom upset. Sometimes, I also forget answers during exams, which affects my performance.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer the question directly by stating what you need to remember daily, then explain briefly. Avoid unrelated or unclear statements like "anxiety and depression plays a vital role in May." Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like appointments and deadlines. I find it easier to focus and remember things when I'm in a quiet environment without distractions.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words. For example, say "I write important things down on my phone or notepad." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: To remember important things, I usually write them down on my phone or in a notepad. If something is very important, I mark it on my calendar to make sure I don't forget.

× To be honest, I forgot things quite often.

✓ To be honest, I forget things quite often.

The sentence refers to a habitual action in the present, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead of the past tense 'forgot'.

× The other day I forgot to wash dishes the next time my mom was very angry at me.

✓ The other day, I forgot to wash the dishes, and the next time my mom was very angry at me.

The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and conjunctions, causing confusion. Adding commas and 'and' clarifies the sequence of events.

× Moreover, I also sometimes for get questions and answers valuating.

✓ Moreover, I also sometimes forget questions and answers during evaluations.

The phrase 'for get' is a typo and should be 'forget'. 'Valuating' is incorrect; the correct word is 'evaluations'. Also, 'during' is the appropriate preposition here.

× I suppose I just need a peaceful and calm environment with not much of noises because it makes it really hard for me to remember anything if I am in a noisy place.

✓ I suppose I just need a peaceful and calm environment with not much noise because it makes it really hard for me to remember anything if I am in a noisy place.

'Noises' should be 'noise' as it is an uncountable noun in this context. 'Not much of noises' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not much noise'.

× Moreover, anxiety and depression plays a vital role in May.

✓ Moreover, anxiety and depression play a vital role in May.

The compound subject 'anxiety and depression' is plural, so the verb should be 'play' instead of 'plays'.

× I will to remember important things, I just not it down on my phones of notepad.

✓ To remember important things, I just write them down on my phone or notepad.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and word choice. 'I will to remember' is incorrect; 'I just write them down' is correct. 'Phones of notepad' should be 'phone or notepad'.

× I will to remember important things, I just not it down on my phones of notepad.

✓ To remember important things, I just write them down on my phone or notepad.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to a singular object, but 'important things' is plural. 'Them' is the correct pronoun to use.