Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断句，保持回答简洁且逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: I am not as good at memorising things as I used to be because my memory has been getting worse. However, I am trying to improve it by using memory books to help me remember important information.

Sugestão: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和细节。建议练习组织答案，先明确回答问题，再用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot the time of my departure for an important business trip abroad. When I arrived at the airport, I realized I had missed my flight, which was very stressful.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，明确表达需要记住的具体内容，并使用连接词。

Exemplo: As a salesperson, I need to remember customer data and the communication process with them. This information is very important for my daily work and helps me maintain good relationships.

Sugestão: 回答表达不流畅，句子结构不完整。建议练习用完整句子描述方法，并使用连接词使回答更自然。

Exemplo: To remember important things, I use a memory book where I write down all the details in advance. On the day of the event, I check my memory book to remind myself of what I need to do.

× I would say I'm not as good eyes I used to be.

✓ I would say I'm not as good as I used to be.

这里缺少介词'as'，正确表达是'not as good as'，表示比较。原句中'good eyes'是错误的词组，应改为'good as'。

× At memorizing things.

✓ At memorizing things,

该句为不完整句子，缺少主语和谓语，应该与前句连贯，形成完整句子。

× Now it's my memory is getting worse.

✓ Now my memory is getting worse.

句子中出现了多余的主语'it'，导致结构混乱，应去掉'it'使句子通顺。

× I'm trying to get my memory back with the help of memory books. Oh. Work life balance.

✓ I'm trying to get my memory back with the help of memory books and work-life balance.

原句中断句不完整，'Oh. Work life balance.'不连贯，应合并为一句，且'work life balance'应加连字符变为'work-life balance'。

× Unfortunately I did as I remember is mostly important thing ever did I ever forgot his departure of my flat.

✓ Unfortunately I did, as I remember, the most important thing I ever forgot was the departure from my flat.

原句时态混乱，且语序错误。'did'后应接具体动作，'forgot'应为过去式，'his departure'应为'the departure'，'of my flat'应为'from my flat'。

× I was on my way to important business trip over boards and when I arrived.

✓ I was on my way to an important business trip overseas, and when I arrived,

句子缺少冠词'an'，'over boards'应为'overseas'，且句子未完成，应加逗号连接后文。

× At the airport, I realized at the time of my departure was.

✓ At the airport, I realized the time of my departure had passed.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语，'at the time of my departure was'不完整，应补充谓语使句子完整。

× As a sales person in my daily life, the most important things I need to remember is Sir data and communication process with my customers which I need to keep.

✓ As a salesperson in my daily life, the most important things I need to remember are sales data and communication processes with my customers which I need to keep.

'salesperson'为单词，'things'为复数，谓语应用复数'are'，'Sir data'应为'sales data'，'communication process'应为复数'processes'。

× En route. Of my. Work which is quite important.

✓ En route of my work, which is quite important.

原句断句不完整，应合并为一句，'en route of my work'表达不准确，建议改为'during my work'或'for my work'。

× Two, remember important things.

✓ To remember important things,

'Two'应为不定式'to'，且句子不完整，应作为状语引导后文。

× The memory book would help.

✓ The memory book helps.

此处表达习惯用一般现在时，表示习惯性动作，且'memory book'前应加定冠词'the'。

× I always write down Sir details on my memory book in advance, so when that day comes, I always check my memory books to remind me, which is important, which is to do.

✓ I always write down the details in my memory book in advance, so when that day comes, I always check my memory book to remind me of what is important and what I need to do.

'Sir details'应为'the details'，'on my memory book'应为'in my memory book'，'memory books'应统一为单数，'to remind me, which is important, which is to do'表达不清，应改为'to remind me of what is important and what I need to do'。