Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng các thành ngữ không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details quickly. For example, I often forget passwords or where I put my keys, which can be quite frustrating.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể về việc quên những điều quan trọng, tránh dùng những câu không rõ nghĩa hoặc sai ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten many important things. For instance, before exams, I study hard but sometimes I forget what I learned during the test, which makes me feel disappointed.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần được tổ chức tốt hơn và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích rõ ràng những việc bạn cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my house keys. My mother always reminds me because if I forget them, it causes a lot of trouble for both of us.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Hãy mô tả cụ thể phương pháp bạn dùng để nhớ những việc quan trọng.

Exemplo: I usually write important things on notes and highlight them. For example, if I need to bring something when I leave the house, I put a note on the table so that the first thing I see in the morning reminds me.

× I am not good at memorizing thing because I for me I have a brain after.

✓ I am not good at memorizing things because, for me, I have a brain like a goldfish.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the phrase 'I have a brain after' is unclear and corrected to 'I have a brain like a goldfish' to express poor memory.

× A golden fish and also it is not my cup of tea to remember something so yeah, I am not good at memorizing things, especially important things like the key or even the.

✓ A goldfish, and also it is not my cup of tea to remember things, so yeah, I am not good at memorizing things, especially important things like keys or even passwords.

The phrase 'a golden fish' should be 'a goldfish' as the correct term. Also, 'the key or even the.' is incomplete and corrected to 'keys or even passwords' for clarity and correct plural usage.

× Especially important things like the key or even the. The key to passwords? Open the Eiffel.

✓ Especially important things like keys or even passwords, such as the key to open the Eiffel Tower.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'The key or even the.' is corrected to 'keys or even passwords' to match plural form and clarity. Added context for 'key to open the Eiffel Tower' for meaning.

× Absolutely, I have forgotten 100 things that really important like.

✓ Absolutely, I have forgotten 100 things that are really important, like...

The phrase 'that really important' lacks the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'have forgotten' is correct present perfect tense for past actions.

× Before my beat my meat sometimes happened I have learned everything on my brain but when I go to test I doesn't remember anything an it is happens a lot of times.

✓ Sometimes before my test, I have learned everything by heart, but when I go to the test, I don't remember anything, and it happens many times.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'beat my meat' is incorrect and replaced with 'test'; 'I doesn't' should be 'I don't' for subject-verb agreement; 'it is happens' corrected to 'it happens'; sentence restructured for clarity.

× I read to remember that. I need to bring my key when I get up house ask, my mother said.

✓ I try to remember that. I need to bring my key when I leave the house, my mother said.

'I read to remember that' is unclear and corrected to 'I try to remember that'. 'When I get up house ask' is incorrect; corrected to 'when I leave the house' for proper preposition and meaning.

× Because when I forgot my key, it is a lot of things that make my mother feel answers and the kind of things and I hope I can remember it clearly.

✓ Because when I forget my key, there are a lot of things that make my mother feel anxious and other similar feelings, and I hope I can remember it clearly.

'When I forgot' changed to 'when I forget' for present tense consistency. 'It is a lot of things' corrected to 'there are a lot of things' for subject-verb agreement. 'Feel answers' is incorrect and replaced with 'feel anxious' for meaning.

× While I usually write in the notes and highlighted like when I need to bring something out of house are in she write a note and put it on the table so when I wake up the first thing I see is the notes so I can remember to bring it.

✓ Usually, I write notes and highlight them. When I need to bring something out of the house, I write a note and put it on the table, so when I wake up, the first thing I see is the note, and I can remember to bring it.

'Write in the notes' corrected to 'write notes'. 'Out of house are in she write' is incorrect and rephrased to 'out of the house, I write a note'. Added commas and conjunctions for sentence clarity and correct preposition usage.