Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat clear but lacks natural phrasing and coherence. Try to use complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'I always forget something not important, lacked in numbers or something like the address,' you could say 'I often forget unimportant details, such as numbers or addresses.'

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget unimportant details like phone numbers or addresses, which can be quite frustrating.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but could be more fluent and natural. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid awkward phrasing. For example, instead of 'Maybe it's about 10 years ago when I was starting in the college,' say 'I think it was about 10 years ago when I started college.'

Exemplo: Yes, I have. I think it was about 10 years ago when I started college, and I forgot my mum's birthday, which was really frustrating for both of us.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organise your thoughts before speaking and use simple, clear sentences. Avoid filler words and irrelevant sounds. For example, you could say 'Now that I am working, I need to remember to check in and check out every day. Also, I have to remember to take care of my children daily.'

Exemplo: Now that I am working, I need to remember to check in and check out every day. Besides that, I also have to remember to take care of my children and their needs.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Focus on clear and concise sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, you could say 'I have tried several methods to remember important things, such as writing notes down or saving them on my phone.'

Exemplo: I have tried several methods to remember important things. For example, I write them down in a notebook or save reminders on my mobile phone.

× I always forget something not important, lacked in numbers or something like the address.

✓ I always forget things that are not important, like numbers or something like an address.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms. 'Something not important' should be 'things that are not important' to match the plural context. Also, 'lacked in numbers' is incorrect; it should be 'like numbers'. The article 'an' is needed before 'address' because it is a singular countable noun.

× Maybe it's about 10 years ago when I was starting in the college.

✓ Maybe it was about 10 years ago when I was starting college.

The phrase 'it's about' should be in past tense 'it was about' to match the time reference '10 years ago'. Also, 'starting in the college' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' is unnecessary here, and 'college' does not need 'the' unless referring to a specific college.

× I forgot my mom's birthday, which was really an frustrating thing.

✓ I forgot my mom's birthday, which was really a frustrating thing.

The article 'an' is used before vowel sounds, but 'frustrating' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a' should be used instead of 'an'.

× Oh thanks damn now I'm working so I need to check in and check out every day so they Ding Dings check in just as the saying I I have children member do everyday.

✓ Oh, thanks. Now I'm working, so I need to check in and check out every day. I have children to take care of every day.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'they Ding Dings check in just as the saying I I have children member do everyday.' This has been corrected to clear, grammatically correct sentences that convey the intended meaning.

× I tried to board up.

✓ I tried to write things down.

'Tried to board up' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. The student probably meant 'tried to write things down' or 'tried to note things down' to remember better.

× I have tried a lot of approaches children and remember things in detail such as writing them down or keeping them in the note of the mobile phone.

✓ I have tried a lot of approaches to remember things in detail, such as writing them down or keeping them in the notes on my mobile phone.

The phrase 'approaches children' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'approaches to remember things'. Also, 'in the note of the mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'in the notes on my mobile phone'.

× That's all of the way that that have tried.

✓ Those are all the ways that I have tried.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It has been corrected to a proper sentence with subject-verb agreement and clear meaning.