Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then providing specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I was one of the top students in my class because I could remember a lot of information effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Also, try to avoid repetition and be more specific about what you forget.

Exemplo: Fortunately, I have never forgotten anything very important. However, sometimes I leave small items like my keys or phone at home by mistake.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and be specific about your planning method.

Exemplo: Every morning, I make a plan for my day to remember my tasks. Sometimes I keep the plan in my mind, but other times I write it down to make sure I don't forget anything.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer linking words. Also, avoid asking questions back to the examiner; instead, make confident statements.

Exemplo: I usually remember important things by repeating them several times. Additionally, I explain them to someone else, which helps me remember better.

× I have a lot of informations in my head because you know that to be the best student you have to memorize a lot of things.

✓ I have a lot of information in my head because you know that to be the best student you have to memorize a lot of things.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'informations'. Use 'information' without 's' to indicate quantity.

× So fortunately this kind of things in my life experience never happened to me.

✓ So fortunately this kind of thing in my life experience has never happened to me.

The phrase 'this kind of things' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'thing'. Also, the present perfect tense 'has never happened' is appropriate here to indicate an experience up to now.

× some little items and things I sometimes forgot at home and then left them at home.

✓ some little items and things I sometimes forget at home and then leave them at home.

The verb tense should be present simple 'forget' and 'leave' to match the habitual action described. Also, 'items and things' is acceptable but could be simplified.

× So this is just an small things, not that important ones.

✓ So these are just small things, not that important ones.

'An' is used before singular nouns starting with a vowel sound, but 'small things' is plural, so 'these are' is correct instead of 'this is an'. Also, 'things' is plural, so 'small' should not have 'an' before it.

× I just make a plan for my day in forward and like what I have to do in the other parts of the day.

✓ I just make a plan for my day ahead and think about what I have to do in the other parts of the day.

The phrase 'in forward' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'ahead' to indicate planning for the future. Also, 'like' is incorrect here; 'think about' or 'consider' fits better.

× So I always try to remember everything in my head or I sometimes just note down and then I usually it will be when it will be.

✓ So I always try to remember everything in my head or sometimes I just note it down, and then I usually remember when it will be.

The original sentence is confusing and has incorrect word order. 'Note down' should be followed by the object 'it'. Also, 'I usually it will be when it will be' is unclear; rephrasing to 'I usually remember when it will be' clarifies the meaning.

× Or just explaining to this things that I remembered to the next person.

✓ Or just explaining these things that I remembered to the next person.

The phrase 'explaining to this things' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'explaining these things'. 'This' should be 'these' to match the plural noun 'things', and 'to' is not needed after 'explaining' when followed by the object.