Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
No, I'm not. Especially when I was a child, I often forgot my house keys which caused me in some trouble.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Sure, when I was a child I often forgot my house keys so that I have to wait outside for my mother to let me in.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Absolutely, doing my homework as a student, homework is very important and it will improve my skills and get good grade which can let me into a good university.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I prefer to take notes because I find it easier to see something that I've written down rather than just trying to memorize it in my head.
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中表达了观点,但语言不够自然,且句子结构有些混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复。
Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I often forgot my house keys, which sometimes caused me trouble.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答内容重复了上一题的内容,缺乏新的细节和丰富的描述。建议提供不同的例子或更具体的细节。
Exemplo: Yes, I have. Once, I forgot my passport before an important trip, which made me very anxious because I almost missed my flight.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不够清晰,且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: I need to remember to do my homework every day because it helps me improve my skills and get good grades, which are important for getting into a good university.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然且表达清晰,但可以增加连接词和具体细节,使回答更丰富。
Exemplo: I prefer to take notes because I find it easier to remember things when I see them written down, rather than just trying to memorize them in my head.
× No, I'm not. Especially when I was a child, I often forgot my house keys which caused me in some trouble.
✓ No, I'm not. Especially when I was a child, I often forgot my house keys which caused me some trouble.
介词'in'在这里使用错误,正确表达是'caused me some trouble',表示'给我带来了一些麻烦'。介词使用错误属于介词使用错误类型。
× Sure, when I was a child I often forgot my house keys so that I have to wait outside for my mother to let me in.
✓ Sure, when I was a child I often forgot my house keys so I had to wait outside for my mother to let me in.
句中时态不一致,前半句是过去时,后半句应使用过去时态'had to',而不是现在时态'have to'。情态动词时态错误属于情态动词使用错误。
× Absolutely, doing my homework as a student, homework is very important and it will improve my skills and get good grade which can let me into a good university.
✓ Absolutely, doing my homework as a student, homework is very important and it will improve my skills and get good grades which can let me into a good university.
'grade'应使用复数形式'grades',因为这里指的是多个成绩。单复数错误属于单数和复数问题。