Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“memorizing thing”应为“memorizing things”，句子结构不完整。建议你直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并且避免重复和多余的词汇。可以用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially when I was in high school. I had to remember a lot of information for subjects like history and politics, so I practiced a lot. Therefore, I believe memorising is an important skill to develop.

Sugestão: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议你用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用连接词组织细节，使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot something very important. I was very tired that day and forgot to write an important assignment. Because of that, I missed the deadline and felt very upset.

Sugestão: 你的回答有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“charge my phone an air pods”应为“to charge my phone and AirPods”。建议你用正确的时态和词汇，表达更准确，同时用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to charge my phone and AirPods before leaving the house. Because I feel anxious if my battery is low, I always keep it above 80% to avoid any problems.

Sugestão: 你的回答表达不够清晰，有语法和用词错误。建议你用简单明了的句子，正确使用词汇和时态，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: If something is very important, I put it on my To-Do List. I use a To-Do List app on my phone and also write it down on paper. This way, I can check it on my phone or see it on my desk to remind myself.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing thing especially when I was in high school, my compulsory subject is history and politics, so I have to memorize a lot of knowledge is.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things especially when I was in high school, my compulsory subjects were history and politics, so I had to memorize a lot of knowledge.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' because there are two subjects mentioned. Also, tense consistency requires 'is' to be changed to 'were' and 'have' to 'had' to match past time reference.

× Yes, I have forgotten a very important is a UM, I remember that day I was very tired and I forgot to write That is a but that's why I was the next day.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten a very important thing, a UM. I remember that day I was very tired and I forgot to write it, but that's why I was upset the next day.

The sentence is missing the noun after 'important' and misuses 'is a UM'. 'UM' is an interjection and should be separated. Also, 'That is a' is incorrect and should be 'it'. The phrase 'was the next day' is incomplete and should be 'was upset the next day' or similar to make sense.

× And then I like lay down on the bed and fell asleep, so I miss out it.

✓ And then I lay down on the bed and fell asleep, so I missed out on it.

The phrase 'like lay down' is incorrect; 'like' should be removed. 'Miss out it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'missed out on it' with the preposition 'on' and past tense 'missed'.

× I need to remember charge my phone an air pods before I went out of my house because I have a little bit OCD.

✓ I need to remember to charge my phone and AirPods before I go out of my house because I have a little bit of OCD.

The verb 'remember' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'charge'. 'An air pods' is incorrect; 'AirPods' is plural and a brand name, so no article is needed. 'Went' should be 'go' to match present tense. 'A little bit OCD' should be 'a little bit of OCD' to be grammatically correct.

× I feel very anxious if I say I don't have so much batteries so I will keep my battery light. Over 80%.

✓ I feel very anxious if I think I don't have enough battery, so I keep my battery level over 80%.

'If I say' is incorrect; it should be 'if I think'. 'So much batteries' is incorrect; 'batteries' is countable plural, but here 'battery' as uncountable is better. 'Battery light' is incorrect; the correct term is 'battery level'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× If it is an extremely important thing for me, I will put it on my To Do List.

✓ If it is an extremely important thing for me, I will put it on my To-Do List.

'To Do List' should be hyphenated as 'To-Do List' as it is a compound noun.

× I have a right and To Do List an A To Do List app on my phone.

✓ I have a written To-Do List and a To-Do List app on my phone.

The phrase 'a right and To Do List an A To Do List app' is confusing and incorrect. It should be 'a written To-Do List and a To-Do List app'. Also, 'To Do List' should be hyphenated.

× So I will add a both of. Then I can check on my phone and also I can see that important thing on my table.

✓ So I will add both of them. Then I can check on my phone and also see that important thing on my table.

'Add a both of' is incorrect; it should be 'add both of them' to refer to two items. 'I can see that important thing' is acceptable but could be improved by specifying the item. The sentence is corrected for pronoun use and clarity.