Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with brief supporting details. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. "wash" instead of "wash over", "events" instead of "occasion, delivery"). Avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine. I like it because it saves time and keeps my clothes very clean, especially after work or when I have to dress for special events. For example, it removes stains quickly and lets me wash many items at once, which is very convenient.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and then explain with accurate reasons. Use correct terms ("vacuum cleaner" instead of "vein machine") and avoid unclear phrases like "wash over clothes" or "stretch our clothes." Provide specific benefits for each machine and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I think both are important. Washing machines clean clothes quickly and remove stains, while vacuum cleaners keep floors and carpets hygienic by removing dust and allergens. Because of these benefits, they save time and help maintain a healthy home.

Sugestão: Good to state you read instructions; improve by being slightly more specific and correcting grammar ("it provides"). Add an example of what kind of information you look for and use a linking word to expand briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually read the instructions because they provide important information about safe use and recommended settings. For instance, I check the power requirements and washing cycles for my machine so I can avoid damaging clothes or the appliance.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace unclear phrases like "basic journal knowledge" with "basic safety and usage information." Give a concise reason and an example of a possible harm prevented by reading instructions.

Exemplo: Yes, it is important because instructions give basic safety and usage information. For example, following them can prevent electric shocks or damage to the appliance, such as using the correct detergent and not overloading the washer.

× There are many machines in my homes but my favorite machine is washing machine because it provide neat and clean clothes which we daily wear at occasion, delivery et cetera which we regularly needed in our daily life.

✓ There are many machines in my home but my favorite machine is the washing machine because it provides neat and clean clothes which we wear daily on occasions, deliveries, etc., and which we regularly need in our daily life.

Errors: 'homes' should be singular 'home' when referring to one's residence; 'washing machine' needs the article 'the' when referring to a specific appliance; 'provide' must agree with singular subject 'washing machine' and become 'provides'; 'daily wear at occasion, delivery et cetera' is ungrammatical and uses plural nouns incorrectly and wrong word forms — rephrase to 'wear daily on occasions, deliveries, etc.'; 'needed' should be present 'need' to match the general present tense. Suggestions: use singular/plural consistently, ensure subject-verb agreement, include articles before specific nouns, and use present tense for habitual actions.

× Yes, washing machine and sweeping machines are important because washing machine has wash over clothes and the vein machine may stretch our clothes.

✓ Yes, the washing machine and sweeping machines are important because the washing machine washes clothes and the spin cycle (or dryer) may stretch our clothes.

Errors: Missing definite article 'the' before 'washing machine' when speaking about a specific appliance; 'washing machine has wash over clothes' is incorrect — verb form and noun usage wrong; 'wash' should be 'washes' to agree with singular subject; 'the vein machine' is likely incorrect word choice — replaced with 'spin cycle' or 'dryer' depending on intended meaning. Suggestions: add articles before specific machines, use correct verb forms for subject-verb agreement, and choose correct vocabulary for machine parts or functions.

× Yes, I read instructions before using a machine because it provide us knowledge about basic information which we did not know about without reading this.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using a machine because it provides us with basic information that we would not know without reading it.

Errors: 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it' (washing machine instruction/manual); missing article 'the' before 'instructions'; 'knowledge about basic information' is redundant and awkward — simplified to 'basic information'; 'which we did not know about without reading this' mixes tenses and pronouns; changed to 'that we would not know without reading it' to express conditional/hypothetical. Suggestions: include articles, ensure subject-verb agreement, avoid redundancy, and use appropriate relative clauses and conditional phrasing.

× Yes, it is important to read the instructions because it provides us basic journal knowledge about uses for the product. We do not get harm our body part or machine by wrongly using it.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they provide us with basic information about how to use the product. We will not harm our bodies or the machine by using it incorrectly.

Errors: 'it provides us' is incorrect because 'instructions' is plural; change to 'they provide us'; 'basic journal knowledge' is incorrect word choice — replaced with 'basic information'; 'about uses for the product' rephrased to 'about how to use the product'; 'We do not get harm our body part or machine by wrongly using it' is ungrammatical: 'get harm' should be 'harm', 'body part' should be plural 'bodies', and 'wrongly using it' is better as 'using it incorrectly'; also changed to future/modal 'will not' to express prevention. Suggestions: match pronouns to plural nouns, use correct collocations ('harm someone' or 'harm our bodies'), and prefer natural adverb placement ('use it incorrectly').