Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and correcting grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. This allows me to focus on other important tasks while my clothes are being cleaned. It has become an essential part of my daily routine.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical mistakes. Make sure to use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'sweeping machines' instead of 'sleeping machines') and provide clear, specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, nowadays, washing machines and sweeping machines play a vital role in our lives because they help maintain cleanliness and hygiene efficiently. For example, sweeping machines make cleaning floors easier, while washing machines ensure our clothes are hygienic.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your ideas more naturally and avoid vague phrases like 'create the guarantee.' Use linking words to connect your points.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it saves time and helps me avoid problems. Additionally, the instructions inform me about important precautions and the expected lifespan of the machine.

Sugestão: Your answer has repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific reasons why reading instructions is important.

Exemplo: Yes, it is important to read the instructions before using any equipment because electronic appliances operate differently. By reading the instructions carefully, we can use them correctly and avoid damage or accidents.

× It helps a save my significant time and I can use this time to complete other important tasks while washing machines clean my clothes and it is it has become a integral part of my life and this.

✓ It helps save my significant time and I can use this time to complete other important tasks while the washing machine cleans my clothes, and it has become an integral part of my life.

The phrase 'helps a save' is incorrect; 'helps' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'a'. Also, 'washing machines clean' should be singular to match 'the washing machine'. 'It is it has' is redundant; 'it has' suffices. 'a integral' should be 'an integral' because 'integral' starts with a vowel sound.

× Yes, in these days, washing machine and sleeping machines are place a vital role in our life and they can easily sweep the they can easily maintain the hygiene and cleaning.

✓ Yes, these days, washing machines and sweeping machines play a vital role in our lives, and they can easily maintain hygiene and cleanliness.

The singular 'washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to match 'sweeping machines'. 'Sleeping machines' is likely a typo for 'sweeping machines'. 'Are place' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'play'. 'Our life' should be plural 'our lives'. 'Maintain the hygiene and cleaning' is awkward; 'maintain hygiene and cleanliness' is better.

× This and washing machine also provide the hygienic clothing and.

✓ The washing machine also provides hygienic clothing.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'This and washing machine' is unclear; it should be 'The washing machine'. 'Provide' should be singular 'provides' to agree with singular subject. 'Hygienic clothing' is acceptable but the sentence needs to be complete.

× It helps me to save by time.

✓ It helps me save my time.

'Helps' should be followed by the base verb without 'to' or 'by'. 'Save by time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'save my time'.

× I can easily use it without any problem and on the other side we can create the guarantee which things we should be aware and how long we can use the machine.

✓ I can easily use it without any problem, and on the other hand, we can ensure which things we should be aware of and how long we can use the machine.

'On the other side' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on the other hand'. 'Create the guarantee' is awkward; 'ensure' or 'be sure' is better. 'Which things we should be aware' needs 'of' at the end to be correct.

× Yes, it is now important for us to be read the instructions before using any equipment because electronic electronic appliance have a different operations and ways and we can easily use them if we read already all the instructions before start to use it.

✓ Yes, it is important for us to read the instructions before using any equipment because electronic appliances have different operations and methods, and we can easily use them if we have already read all the instructions before starting to use them.

'To be read' is incorrect; it should be 'to read'. 'Electronic electronic appliance' is repetitive; 'electronic appliances' is correct plural. 'Have a different operations' should be 'have different operations'. 'If we read already' should be 'if we have already read'. 'Before start to use it' should be 'before starting to use them'.