Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more natural and effective. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors such as missing articles.

Exemplo: My favorite machine at home is the tractor because it helps my father and me increase our productivity and income. For example, it allows us to plow the fields much faster than doing it manually, which saves us a lot of time and effort.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains contradictions. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with logical reasons. Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort in daily chores. However, some people believe that doing these tasks manually can improve health by increasing physical activity.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to improve coherence. Avoid repetition and minor grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. For instance, when I use the washing machine, I carefully follow the guidelines to ensure I wash the clothes properly and avoid damaging them.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas clearly with complete sentences and specific examples. Use linking words to connect your points logically and avoid grammatical mistakes.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe it is very important to read the instructions because they help you operate machines safely and correctly. For example, my mother once had an accident because she did not follow the instructions on a kitchen appliance, which could have been avoided.

× Well, I'm a farmer and my favorite machine is tractor because it helped me and my father to increase our productivity and income.

✓ Well, I'm a farmer and my favorite machine is the tractor because it helped me and my father to increase our productivity and income.

The noun 'tractor' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific machine. Omitting the article causes a grammatical error related to singular and plural usage.

× No, I think it's not important because it can complete your work easily and if the machines are not present in our life, then you become very healthy and health conscious.

✓ No, I think they are not important because they can complete your work easily and if machines are not present in our life, then you become very healthy and health conscious.

The subject 'washing machines and sweeping machines' is plural, so the pronouns and verbs referring to them should also be plural ('they are', 'they can'). Using singular forms 'it' and 'is' causes a singular and plural agreement error.

× So I think that wash machine and sleep machines are not important for our life.

✓ So I think that washing machines and sweeping machines are not important for our life.

The terms 'wash machine' and 'sleep machines' are incorrect; the correct plural forms are 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines'. This is a singular and plural noun form error.

× Obviously, I read the instruction before using the machine which is mentioned in the top of the machine.

✓ Obviously, I read the instructions before using the machine which are mentioned at the top of the machine.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, 'at the top' is the correct prepositional phrase. This is a singular and plural issue and a preposition usage issue.

× Obviously, I read the instruction before using the machine which is mentioned in the top of the machine.

✓ Obviously, I read the instructions before using the machine which are mentioned at the top of the machine.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to a position on the surface of something.

× Like when I'm using machine washing machine, I read the instruction how to use and wash the clothes with the help of the machine.

✓ Like when I'm using the washing machine, I read the instructions on how to use it and wash the clothes with the help of the machine.

The phrase 'machine washing machine' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'the washing machine'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Of course it's very important to read the instruction because it help you to easily operate the machine and it is very important to save your life because sometime machines cause your health like when my mother used the machine they defected with the.

✓ Of course it's very important to read the instructions because they help you to easily operate the machine and it is very important to save your life because sometimes machines can affect your health, like when my mother used the machine and it malfunctioned.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The verb 'help' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject 'instructions'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The phrase 'cause your health' is incorrect; 'affect your health' is correct. The sentence ending is incomplete and unclear; 'they defected with the' is incorrect and replaced with 'it malfunctioned' for clarity. These are singular/plural issues, verb agreement, adverb usage, and sentence structure errors.